Great job on the writing I loved it!

Welcome to the club!

Go player

you should make this into an actual story with more chapters

I love this. It's well written and beautiful.

Pls make another one where they frickle frackle and sasgay watches

This was beautiful and sad i was literally

You know I loved this. It irked me that Sasuke tried to turn it on Naruto. What a bastard. As for Itachi that was purely calculated but I was happy for him. I would have loved to see how Sasuke reacted. I was only hoping that he regretted what he did to Naruto. He was a bastard for what he did to Naruto.

I like it a lot! **

Wow...Itanaru is way better than narusasu. but I still ship narusasu

Sasuke has no fucking right to come home to Naruto and be pissed that the Uzumaki was fucking around with his brother! He cheated on Naruto with Kiba and forgot the blonds birthday! Sasuke dosen't deserve Naruto! Naruto deserves better! Sasuke is such a selfish asshole if he can't do relationships then he should just break up with Naruto not constantly cheat on the poor innocent blond...this really breaks my heart because SasuNaru (Next to KyuuNaru) is my second favorite ship! How dare Sasuke take three years of Narutos love and be so ungrateful as to cheat on Naruto...WHAT A FUCKING BASTARD! Oh fuck I was so satisfied when Sasuke walked in on Itachi and Naruto getting it on...it was the perfect revenge! Poor Naru knew about Sasukes unfaithfulness but he still stayed faithful to Sasuke through all those years...Naruto took all the insults and abuse (both physical/verbal/emotional/mental) from Sasuke yet he still cared and loved for the Uchiha...but yes Sasuke missing his birthday was the breaking point...it must of hurt so much when he heard form Itachi that Sasuke slept with Kiba it must have broken him...all he thought of himself was 'Useless'...this made me cry so hard...I'm so glad Itachi was there to hold and comfort him... (With how much of a bastard Sasuke is in this I ship the ItaNaru pretty fucking hard I want to see them fuck (make love) so hard that Naru gets pregnant...Itachi and Naruto deserve eachother! Sasuke can go fuck himself! Because he may have money and he may get to fuck whoever he wants but he'll never have Naruto again.. he'll never have that full devotion and love...the amazing and beautiful sex...it's no longer his to shit all over! It just upsets me how Naruto stayed with Sasuke for all those years loving the Uchiha even though not once had Sasuke said 'i love you' Naruto knew Sasuke didn't love him and was just using him...yet he stayed because he loved the Uchiha's so much... (Naruto clearly likes Itachi he's more comfortable with him even though they never really talked and the kiss swept him off his feet to the point where nothing else mattered (he needed that loving kiss and the affection and attention Itachi gave him!also the way Itachi treats him so kindly...it's so refreshing compared to Sasukes cruel words/actions/treatment towards Naruto..) I'm so glad Naruto broke up with Sasuke...and shit and that intimate scene between Itachi and Naruto came up and Itachi was so considerate and careful with how he pleasured Naruto...making sure Naruto was feeling good and he took his time preparing him (Mainly because his cock is way bigger then Sasukes to the point where he made Naruto feel like a virgin and we all know Itachi enjoyed being inside Narutos tight hot walls...) and sucking him off...3...I love the way they made love (fucked like bunnies) how Itachi nuzzled Naruto lovingly giving him loving kisses and fucked Naruto so hard into the couch/bed (wherever the fuck they were) that he made Naruto scream out in ecstacy not even being able to talk anymore from all the pleasure...shit they fucked so hard (Itachi even came inside Naruto no condoms involved) that I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto got pregnant... (I was hoping for a love confession between the two but the intense love making is good enough..)

OMFQINGD!
Itanaru for life! I love it. Not many authors can make a good love story with smut involved. This is truly impressive.

me encanto

I completely agree with you. ItaNaru is so much better and your fanfic just proves my point. SasuNaru was once my favorite but forget that shit, this is the best. Great fanfic, it was fantastic!

I SO FUCKING AGREE!️️️️️️️️️

I fecking love it. it's PERFECT! I USE to be a sasanaru fanboy. but then I discovered ItaNaru. I also love Sasuke bashing.