| Reviews for The Twelve Days Of Christmas |
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   lost in a musical daydream chapter 12 . 7/27/2011 Awww! I feel so happy and so sad at the same time that the fic is over ;( |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 9 . 7/27/2011 SNAPE! |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 8 . 7/27/2011 LOCKHART! Haha. This chapter was kinda sad :'( CATS ARE SUPERIOR TO DOGS! |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 Lol! Oh, Ishboo... |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 5 . 7/27/2011 This is bloody brilliant, you know that? |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 2 . 7/27/2011 ahahahahaha |
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 Haha, cute! |
| don't.diss.the.puff chapter 12 . 7/25/2011 That was fun to read! Sad, but I like the happy ending. Cool christmas carol. |
| Reniefuwa chapter 1 . 9/1/2010 Would you like a tip for writing better? If not, you can just ignore this review, but I'm assuming that you do want to become a better writer, because of how much you do it. Here's the tip: When a character addresses another character and uses their name, use a comma. For example, Wrong: Do you need to go to the bathroom Dave? Right: Do you need to go to the bathroom, Dave? I, for one, don't know what a "bathroom Dave" is, and I don't think I want to. If you utilize this tip, I know your various fics will be easier to read and your dialogue will flow more smoothly. That is all. ;) |
| speedo fannypacker chapter 9 . 5/5/2004 hiyo! i love this story! D please update sooN!xD |
| Phantasmik chapter 12 . 2/16/2004 ::Wipes tears away:: Great ending Can I borrow the spell? Please? |
| Phantasmik chapter 4 . 2/16/2004 Im officially voting this as the best Christmas fic ever! Mind if I borrow the bookand spells and a couple of carols? |
| Broadwaypoetess chapter 12 . 8/26/2003 Very nice. Exen though it's August. Still, nice. |
| uncertainfate chapter 12 . 7/22/2003 omg that was so sweet and well writen. i didnt have a chance to write one for each ch. but they were great. i'll read one of your others tomorrow maybe. could you read mine? 'tales of the marauders?' please? if not thats okay too. gtg! ~*~Br*tney~*~ |
| Lavinia Lavender chapter 1 . 7/5/2003 Wow-that was really good. Okay, the ending was very sentimental, and Severus a bit out of character, but I loved your jokes! They were brilliant. I'm plagerizing a few. ;-) -Lavinia |
