so like if u cant incorporate dialogue, then just separate it

I seriously love your idea of placing the seal on sasuke by jiraiya. In fact I love it so much like I'm whining about y they couldn't do this in the real story. I mean this would have shown how much jiraiya and tsunade team work is frightening. Thanks for this story..

Senjutsu is not auxiliary. Senjutsu is a mixture of the user's chakra (Yin/Yang)/and nature energy.

Actually, it multiplies the effects of the Kyuubi cloak.
(Naruto's energyKyuubi energy) times Nature energy equals sage mode.

Didn't kakashi copy the ice style from snow country? Also haku is the only one with the bloodline, ice style can be used by normal ninja if there is already snow/ice around.

Woah. I absolutely loved this story. Especially the fact that the relationship between Naruto and Yūgao didn’t feel forced.

One of the best I’ve ever read

Ok since the author doesn’t seem to be updating fics anymore and seems to have all but abandoned his account I feel I should correct something he said in his announcement for this chapter that I have corrected many times for others. Elemental bloodline are needed for the internal molding of multiple elements. Not for the jutsu themselves. If the element in question for example ice or snow is in abundance around the ninja it can be manipulated externally without the need of a bloodline. I believe Kakashi did in fact explain this in the anime at some point.

This is lit I mean your right about kishimoto blowing up entire series by 4th great ear so excellent job on ending.

Nahhh ill just ignore the kyuubi part.

Now after mastering wind manipulation the next level is vacuum manipulation

I liked the idea of the story, I didn’t understand naruto’s obsession on sasuke. So him regretting what his previous decisions early on the story is great. I don’t like aged gap pairing so to compensate, in my mind, i just imagine yugao as her younger version when she was still in kakashi’s anbu squad. PEACE!

Great story loved it

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loved it

I really like this one a lot!

The only thing was what happen with Kabuto he turned completely into a serpent?, he died?

And I imagine Zetsu will have to wait for another rinnegan to be born... fat chance of that without the Uzumaki. The only one alive must be Karin, somewhere.