Hello, this is (above) and I would just love to say that I love this. I would put in a request for you to continue writing this story, but considering you haven't edited this in 10 years then I would say that is a little out of the question. I did love how there were no OOC's in this and you portrayed the emotions quite well. Any whoo, you are a great writer and I will go look at your other stories asap owo! Keep Writing (uhh. u get wat i mean i guess)!

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Man out if all the Eggy fanfics I have to say THIS on is the BEST im so sorry you can't finish it and I totally understand

For one you spelled oven as over. I think you did a great job establishing the plot. However if you are going to write a T rated fanfiction you might want to at least make it a little more likek FAng and Max in the books at least.

oh it was sooooooooooo good this is on my favroits waiting for the next chapter. its good keep on writing.

Iggy don't listen to those losers. They are going to run into a wall. i will laugh and laugh and laugh.

Keep writing I loved this story!

Soh... I herd u liek Eggy? /100/

Hehe:D Okay, now time to get serious with my critique.

I noticed your actual "point of view" changed as you switched from Iggy to Ella. It transitioned from 2nd person omniscient to 1st person. Is there some sort of reason behind this? I'm genuinely curious. On that note, I think you should make both points of view 1st person so that we are more clear about Iggy's thoughts. Ya know? Well, anyways, it was lovely to read such a well-written fanfiction. I subscribed to your story and added it to my favorites. :) I bid you adieu.

Plz update? The story is to good to go to waste

i love this story :) it's really good, when in the series does this take place? also i noticed a few times you would change the story from ella's pov to iggy's pov but then you would say "he" referring to iggy. when it's iggys pov he should be saying I. other than that it's really good :)

oh, this is really good! i love it! i usually don't push Eggy too much, i prefer Iggel, Miggy, or Niggy (sometimes Figgy), but this is well written. i hope you're planning on adding another chapter, it's really good. please? for me? (supposed to be a please face... dunno if it turned out good)

Holy fudge! This rocks! Seriously, this is the best Eggy fic I've read so far :D I really loved Ella and Iggy's talk in chapter 1, and I loved it when Iggy discovered that be might have feeleings for her (which he does xD) It depresses me how mean people can be. Poor Iggy, it's not his fault he's blind. I'm sad. :o But that's good, don't worry, it's great to make the reader feel every emotion, so I'm happy! xD I hope that in future chapters you'll make all the kids in school respect Iggy. I mean, Iggy's just so awesome! (Iggy fangirl, look at my name xD) Please update real soon! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more! You're very talented! :)

Wow, so now I know what's in Iggy's crazy head. That was so sad, and beautifully written. Please write more, it's an amazing story, one of my absolute favorites!

I really hope you write more of this! I love Iggy, he's the best :-)

-grins- I love this fanfic. Just thought I should say that. Love it. Oh, and at one part you have:

Well, she reasoned, I suppose I’ll just have to make sure he feels comfortable, I’ll do everything I can to make sure he enjoys school! Yeah, that’s the spirit.

“What are you looking so motivated about?” Iggy raised an eyebrow at me.

I giggled. “Oh, nothing.”

It's about half way down the page. I just thought I should point out that Iggy wouldn't be able to see Ella looking motivated.

Anyway, this story is awesome! :) Please update soon!

Vera

Aww, I'm sad this is on hiatus. I really like Eggy/this story.

lawl. I just remembered randomly in the story about Iggy, Gazzy, and Fang in California. And Iggy was all "BEACH BUNNIES!" and Fang was all "...And that girl is eating a chocolate ice cream cone and, whoops, it just fell on her... chest."

xD Gotta love boys(: Gotta love your story. Hope you can update!