Reviews for Inheritance
BabyGhost123 chapter 4 . 8/29/2014
U have to update soon...this story is one story that I loved...never thought that they will become lovers though every story I' be read it sure wasn't that kind of easy from the beginning. ...update soon
Chellyisback chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
Hullo! Did u stoped writing? Pleeeease say no! I just loved the other story and now the sequel is on stop. :/
Savana Moon chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
wow i just joined too comment on this story ( but i will also write some of my own ) IT IS GREAT!
so light and L adopt the child yes?
themysteryofjade chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
hi, i've been following this story since yesterday...i read irrefutable connection and this sequel. its great! although im sad to notice that youu have not updated in 3 years!... and by what you mentioed of mat, mello, and near im sad to guess that kira and l's reign will come to a sad reign even after sakuya taes over andfails, yes? very sad. nonetheless i really hope you update soon. i'd be grateful
CaptainOfMyShip chapter 4 . 12/31/2011
well written so far. I eagerly await the rest.
tia22 chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
ya! i totally agree. mpregs are ridiculous like wth? i love this sequel btw :)
Thisismedealwithit chapter 4 . 8/22/2010
He a litlle jelo of sakuya isnt he. i cant wait for the next chappie. i think it would be good if light and sakuya had a little bonding moment. it would be cute. also l and light should have a date or something.
Thisismedealwithit chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I like it. its really good. i thought it was funnny that L could make ryuk twithcy with his gaze. i mean ryuk is a god of death and L gets under his skin
mudkiprox chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
- really awesome. I coulnt stop reading this series!
Wingwyrm chapter 4 . 2/23/2010
Very interesting. I like that Light feels a little, er, leftout(?) about L liking the kid(though I would be greatly intrigued to see Light turning around and liking the kiddo too LOL). I wonder how Light's parents are going to react to finding out that their son's lover basically adopted a child without talking it over with Light LOL (Does Light's mom know that her son is in a homosexual relationship, or did Soichiro not mention it? Would be fun to see her reaction to finding out that Light has both a lover and a child when he comes to

Light: Mother, this is my lover. And my son.

Sachiko: Oh. Dear, you said you'd bring presents. Not a ready-made family.)

And I think Ryuk would like to have a little tyke around. Should prove to be an interesting mixup in the lives of L&Kira :) Also, Watari is so cute when he's being all fatherly to L.

I am excited to see what you have planned for Matt, Mello and Near. I never liked them to begin with.

I read the first story to this series and liked it. :) I would have liked to see more on the teams reactions to Light being coerced into a relationship with Misa, although I don't think the Captain would be too worried about his son because Light already told him that he didn't take it seriously. I did enjoy the reveal to Matsuda.

-Really, the only 'complaint' that I had about Irrefutable Connection was that the ending seemed a bit abrupt. THAT'S OKAY THOUGH, BECAUSE YOU SEQUELED :):)
Sony Boy chapter 4 . 11/17/2009
First off: I read IC and I adored it. I never seen/read a story before where both of them work together like this. So the second I saw this I cliked. Sad that there is only 4 chapters but I can work with it.

Its an interesting twist having Light and L have a kid around them...L is happy to take care of him-I guess all his time in Whammy helps with younger/little kids-although Light is not. Light seems to live in a 'world' were only he and L exist. Having a kid around is intruding in this world and well, it may get messy. Light has for 3 years(?) had L's undivided personal attention-cases don't count-so he's possessive, in love and trusts only L; and suddenly this little person is intruding in their life...oh. That may get bad. Light may have to think of Sakuya like a pet to accept his precense. Of course if you think about it, if Light can come around, Sakuya can be their heir-well,well if he's smart enough. L and Kira's heir. *shiver*

Mello, Matt and Near will not be happy at all. They want to be L and want to be WITH L. Not gona be pretty.
slime chan chapter 4 . 10/31/2009
Oh thank goodness, an update! I adore the prequel to this and was sad when this one only had three chapters. I'd almost lost hope. hehe. But I really like the fact they've taken on a child, it will round the characters out very well. Also, I' quite fond of Light's description of what the couple have; it's more possessive and very key to his type of personality. A wonderful development and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
3waypetal chapter 4 . 10/18/2009
Gosh! I love your story, I think it's cute that Light is Jealous...as long as L and him don't get into a fight or anything. Anyway, I love yor stories! I read 'Irrefutable Connecton' first and absolutely loved it so jumped right into this one! Please update soon, I can't wait to see when Mello, Matt and Near come in!
Wicked Cheshire chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
I love this story, just as much as I loved Irrefutable Connection.

You've had me hanging onto every word since chapter one of IC!

I'm intrigued to know where you'll take this.

Can't wait for your future chapters!
fouloldron chapter 4 . 10/5/2009
I think Ryuuk is assisting in the child watching as it means that he gets more apples for killing anyone after the boy.

Another great chapter. I adore this entire series.

Thanks for continuing it. :)
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