Reviews for Inheritance |
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BabyGhost123 chapter 4 . 8/29/2014 U have to update soon...this story is one story that I loved...never thought that they will become lovers though every story I' be read it sure wasn't that kind of easy from the beginning. ...update soon |
Chellyisback chapter 4 . 11/22/2012 Hullo! Did u stoped writing? Pleeeease say no! I just loved the other story and now the sequel is on stop. :/ |
Savana Moon chapter 4 . 7/27/2012 wow i just joined too comment on this story ( but i will also write some of my own ) IT IS GREAT! so light and L adopt the child yes? |
themysteryofjade chapter 4 . 5/17/2012 hi, i've been following this story since yesterday...i read irrefutable connection and this sequel. its great! although im sad to notice that youu have not updated in 3 years!... and by what you mentioed of mat, mello, and near im sad to guess that kira and l's reign will come to a sad reign even after sakuya taes over andfails, yes? very sad. nonetheless i really hope you update soon. i'd be grateful |
CaptainOfMyShip chapter 4 . 12/31/2011 well written so far. I eagerly await the rest. |
tia22 chapter 3 . 1/20/2011 ya! i totally agree. mpregs are ridiculous like wth? i love this sequel btw :) |
Thisismedealwithit chapter 4 . 8/22/2010 He a litlle jelo of sakuya isnt he. i cant wait for the next chappie. i think it would be good if light and sakuya had a little bonding moment. it would be cute. also l and light should have a date or something. |
Thisismedealwithit chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 I like it. its really good. i thought it was funnny that L could make ryuk twithcy with his gaze. i mean ryuk is a god of death and L gets under his skin |
mudkiprox chapter 4 . 5/16/2010 - really awesome. I coulnt stop reading this series! |
Wingwyrm chapter 4 . 2/23/2010 Very interesting. I like that Light feels a little, er, leftout(?) about L liking the kid(though I would be greatly intrigued to see Light turning around and liking the kiddo too LOL). I wonder how Light's parents are going to react to finding out that their son's lover basically adopted a child without talking it over with Light LOL (Does Light's mom know that her son is in a homosexual relationship, or did Soichiro not mention it? Would be fun to see her reaction to finding out that Light has both a lover and a child when he comes to Light: Mother, this is my lover. And my son. Sachiko: Oh. Dear, you said you'd bring presents. Not a ready-made family.) And I think Ryuk would like to have a little tyke around. Should prove to be an interesting mixup in the lives of L&Kira :) Also, Watari is so cute when he's being all fatherly to L. I am excited to see what you have planned for Matt, Mello and Near. I never liked them to begin with. I read the first story to this series and liked it. :) I would have liked to see more on the teams reactions to Light being coerced into a relationship with Misa, although I don't think the Captain would be too worried about his son because Light already told him that he didn't take it seriously. I did enjoy the reveal to Matsuda. -Really, the only 'complaint' that I had about Irrefutable Connection was that the ending seemed a bit abrupt. THAT'S OKAY THOUGH, BECAUSE YOU SEQUELED :):) |
Sony Boy chapter 4 . 11/17/2009 First off: I read IC and I adored it. I never seen/read a story before where both of them work together like this. So the second I saw this I cliked. Sad that there is only 4 chapters but I can work with it. Its an interesting twist having Light and L have a kid around them...L is happy to take care of him-I guess all his time in Whammy helps with younger/little kids-although Light is not. Light seems to live in a 'world' were only he and L exist. Having a kid around is intruding in this world and well, it may get messy. Light has for 3 years(?) had L's undivided personal attention-cases don't count-so he's possessive, in love and trusts only L; and suddenly this little person is intruding in their life...oh. That may get bad. Light may have to think of Sakuya like a pet to accept his precense. Of course if you think about it, if Light can come around, Sakuya can be their heir-well,well if he's smart enough. L and Kira's heir. *shiver* Mello, Matt and Near will not be happy at all. They want to be L and want to be WITH L. Not gona be pretty. |
slime chan chapter 4 . 10/31/2009 Oh thank goodness, an update! I adore the prequel to this and was sad when this one only had three chapters. I'd almost lost hope. hehe. But I really like the fact they've taken on a child, it will round the characters out very well. Also, I' quite fond of Light's description of what the couple have; it's more possessive and very key to his type of personality. A wonderful development and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
3waypetal chapter 4 . 10/18/2009 Gosh! I love your story, I think it's cute that Light is Jealous...as long as L and him don't get into a fight or anything. Anyway, I love yor stories! I read 'Irrefutable Connecton' first and absolutely loved it so jumped right into this one! Please update soon, I can't wait to see when Mello, Matt and Near come in! |
Wicked Cheshire chapter 4 . 10/6/2009 I love this story, just as much as I loved Irrefutable Connection. You've had me hanging onto every word since chapter one of IC! I'm intrigued to know where you'll take this. Can't wait for your future chapters! |
fouloldron chapter 4 . 10/5/2009 I think Ryuuk is assisting in the child watching as it means that he gets more apples for killing anyone after the boy. Another great chapter. I adore this entire series. Thanks for continuing it. :) |