Shin is fudging adorable.

Write on.!
~Yuna

Omg thank you! Does Shin really think this?! ... He might... I'll say he does because I ship them. With all love, hope, and kindness, bye~

Yes, I admit it. I really liked this story!

This isn't the strangest way I've seen (read?) someone get wooed, but it's close
I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Sena. I mean yes, getting tackled hurts but I think having Shin on top of you is well worth a few bruises *nosebleed*.
I liked that Shin tried to be gentle whilst tackling so cute and apparently it worked, since Sena seems interested in 'getting tackled more often'

C-cool *_* #gaped in awe#

I love it! Shin "tackles" Sena.

Sweet mother of lord, I've found my sanctuary.

Excuse the unnecessary comment of mine, but this piece was exactly what I was hoping to find since discovering about E21. You see, Sena/Shin is one of my OTPs, and pure, innocent fanfics such as this one have me clutching my shirt and resisting the urge to caress my screen as if I could reach the words with the mere touch of my fingertips.

The characters were so in tune, and your diction is beyond enjoyable in terms of reading. I enjoyed every second of this piece. Please continue to write amazing fanfics!

Awesome. Sweet. Lovely.

Even though I like the story and the way it's told, there's just one thing that doesn't click - you're forgeting about the helmets, which they'd be surely wearing during the game and which would make any nose-brushing and the likes impossible (not to mention the eyeshiled)... it kind of bothered me.

HE DOES LINGER TOO LONG. It's like, God, are you SURE it's not a valid boys' love cartoon? :P

My favorite line: "We can go jogging together." That was so innocent and sweet and adorable for Shin to have said. xD

I've read another one just like this but this one was definately better! Try making another one!

Love Minawa

Yes! Yes, Shin does linger! Sets my yaoi fangirl mind racing with dirty scenarios. XD Definitely cute.

Lol, this story cracked me up. You make me want to go reread all the parts where Sena and Shin face off. XD Nicely done, I liked how Shin is unknowingly mysterious and Sena's confusion came off naturally. Really enjoyed this, thanks for the read!

You're totally onto something here!

lol, I totally agree with that! I'm fairly certain that it's just the anime that draws it out, giving their little 'what's going on in their heads' thing... but seriously! you tackle, and you get up... that's about a minute... not 5

:3

Really hope you do more ShinSena!