This is totally awesome!

That is all I can say :P

Several spelling mistakes, but a good storyline. Not enough details, but no OOCs to be seen. One big thing, though, START A NEW PARAGRAPH WHEN YOU CHANGE SPEAKERS!11! I've said this before, if you recall. Anyway, final score 3.5 out of 5.

Yay Drasca is dead! And I guess he really was paranoid... if you get caught, swallow it... 0.0 um... yeah, weird. Anyways, I liked the last part of the story too.

Rouge: So what were you two doing?

Rodolfo: (About to speak)

Shadow: (Covers Rodolfo's mouth) Soccer.

XD that was great! Lol, nice job on this, but now the new story? I'm interested! Great job on this Ivy-chan!

I just read the prologue, chapter one and now this chapter! I am impressed! Who would've thought of Scourge the Hedgehog doing something nice and not being a womanizer like always? Lol, anyways, you did good by ending on a cliff hanger. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Please update as soon as you can!