Reviews for Dark Future Drabbles |
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Lobstrocity chapter 19 . 1/21/2013 This story is incredible, i haven't read another like it on here. I think chapter 15 is my favorite so far. I love the way you capture the emotions of all the characters and particularly between Terra and Slade. I can almost taste how crushed Terra is throughout the story. Please write more. And soon! |
Kyo Kaulitz chapter 19 . 11/18/2012 MORE MORE MORE |
SladeRavenFan chapter 19 . 11/8/2012 Glad you updated. Short, but well done. Sorry for the short review, but it's late over here. |
Reader chapter 18 . 3/18/2012 Aesome story |
Noodles Bamboodles chapter 18 . 4/25/2011 Yay! A Titan has returned! I love how Fixit and Cyborg are now friends, that's so cute. There were a few awkward sentences. For example: "It seemed so long ago now, yet here he was again." Take out the 'now'. Otherwise it doesn't make sense. The 'seemed' is in the past, and the 'now' contradicts that. "He moved his hands making fists and releasing them then he turns and looks into a jagged mirror..." There should be a period after 'them', and 'turns' should be 'turned' Anyway, I love how you're using all these characters! I hope you keep updating :D |
Noodles Bamboodles chapter 17 . 6/13/2010 Whoa...dark, twisted, evil...I like it. I think you're the only author that actually has the guts to do these kinds of things to our favorite characters. Very nice |
Noodles Bamboodles chapter 16 . 3/12/2010 Ooh, nice sense of emotion here. While I do think it's a little too far-fetched to make Batman a ghost, it IS a n interesting concept, which is what Fanfic is all about. But still, you should probably say that Raven took him from the afterlife or something to make it more "realistic" (if I can even use that word in a story like this XD) But anyway, I still do love this story and hope you continue soon |
salvador vladimir chapter 15 . 2/9/2010 that was the best one ever please update pronto! |
WHAT chapter 15 . 1/30/2010 My god this is amazing, however I will never forgive you for the punny title in chapter 15. (just kidding) I love your character portrayals, especially Terra's. She just so broken...it's sort of like woobie destroyer of worlds cranked up to 11. If you don't understand: /Main/WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Anyways, please keep writing! |
Noodles Bamboodles chapter 15 . 1/21/2010 *GASP!* When I said you should bring Batman back soon, I didn't mean KILL him! I'm not really sure how I feel about this chapter 'cause on one hand, I loved the beginning with their banter, especially the parts about Robin (jeez, for that moment when I thought you had brought him back...) and I liked how Batman sacrificed himself for Terra and Slade's fear for Terra and her development as a character were awesome! But Holy Homicide, you killed Batman! And P.S. He'd probably be able to get out of just a plain grip on his neck ;) So other than the fact that you KILLED BATMAN, well done, and please update soon. |
anon chapter 15 . 1/18/2010 Slade is a jerk $$ but he does care he loves his children Grant, Rose, and Jericho like David Cain and Cassandra Cain |
VolantRedX chapter 15 . 1/17/2010 Good work, you write a very compelling Slade. the banter between him and Batman was well done. One little thing though you used the wrong form of straight. Just a heads up. |
kitkatkart chapter 14 . 1/10/2010 Update, please! :D Best Titans fic EVER! |
kitkatkart chapter 11 . 1/10/2010 This story is so original and gripping! One word: AWESOME. |
kitkatkart chapter 8 . 1/10/2010 This is so sad! Don't worry, Terra! (By the way, this is before she kills Superman, right?) |