This is a really good story. I can tell that it hasn't been updated lately and that's a shame. I would have liked to have seen how it would have ended. Anyway, good job.

Glad to see an update! I've missed this.

hope to see the next chapter soon can wait. interesting story.

i enjoyed this chapter. The only thing is that i love my jomax and since i don't get it in this reality i like to get as detailed as possible with their interactions. Keep going, i look forward to the next one.

I liked Johnny & Maxie. They had chemistry. Unfortunately the GH writers went with the "Beauty & the Beast" storyline (Spinelli & Maxie). You understood their characters. They are both seriously flawed and they know it. I truly love your story. This is how it should have been after the storm. I hope you update soon.

I'm so happy you updated!

Matt was hilarious, I'm happy you brought him into the story. And loved the JoMax as always.

Can't wait for more :)

I really like your story and you gave the Maxie I like. Not the one she is now. Maxie is broken person, and when you lose people like she has it changes you. Guza and the writers at GH don't get she was perfect the way she was. Maxie may be a bitch but so what?

Ya know. All you need to know about Maxie is to remember how she was with Georgie. They may have fought and disagreed on a lot of things but Maxie loves Georgie and when she died that made her more broken. GH should of used that. Georgie loved Maxie too and that is all you need to know about the person Maxie is.

Great job with this story and I hope you update soon!

Kathy

wait why would ric want to do something to maxie. omg i really dont want to see lulu succeed with her revenge plans towards maxie. they should just be friends somehow. please update again soon the story is getting good

This story is fantastic! I love all the different characters you are using and of course JoMax. I really hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

please update this story is interesting

I'm so happy to have found this brilliant JoMax fix. With the way things are on the show right now, this is what I need - JoMax that is passionate and real! I can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

YAY! you updated! I love love love this story! Great job and please update again soon!

I really loved this story. I just read the whole thing! Really AWESOME!

WOW. The end was insanely intense.

Loved this part earlier

Her life had been reduced to a glorified game of chutes and ladders with Maxie Jones. Because in reality, that’s all it really was. One of them would stomp over the other and before long they would both be flying down a chute

yay i was so excited to see an update! i love that johnny trusted maxie enough to tell her the truth and that maxie stayed to help him instead of running...update soon i cant wait to see what happens next