Reviews for Body vs Beauty |
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LittleRiverSong chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 Aww that was Well written and very cute! |
cornelia marie hale chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 wow love it |
LadyAlice23 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010 That was one of the BEST sonnets I've ever read :) |
piercingemeralds2 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010 Very cute! |
Nadiah.Z.S chapter 1 . 7/14/2009 WHOA! I love it! Ur really good! keep it up! :P |
mangocider chapter 1 . 6/27/2009 aww that was soo sweet |
Starlightlovesya123 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009 This is really good! Keep up good work |
GeoKitten chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 i love this it was so sweet. and i could imagin ian saying this. |
thisisasecretnow chapter 1 . 3/7/2009 A couple things confused me here and there - firstly, the third line is worded a bit weirdly - maybe lose the contraction - secondly, near the end, I don't see the connection between 'concern' and 'shiny hair' like I do in all the other lines, and thirdly, I think that "I SPEAK no lies" would make more sense than "I SAY no lies". Besides, those few things, however, I thought it was very nice. I really liked the play on the word soul near the middle, and my absolute favorite line was probably "Because of the silver I love the eyes"... maybe because that's what most humans would hate? Anyway, I was also impressed with the last two lines, because those are often hard to get to rhyme and not sound cheesy. Overall, nice job. |
Kielagh chapter 1 . 2/18/2009 I love your poem! It's so beautiful! You're so good at poetry! |
ADoubtfulGuest chapter 1 . 2/15/2009 Awesome, I love it :] I could never write a sonnet XD |
breaking d moonlight eclipse chapter 1 . 2/15/2009 aww.. a really heart warming sonnet. :) |
Super Reader chapter 1 . 2/15/2009 That's really great. I could never write a sonnet. I have trouble with poems. But this was done really well. And I've always liked the Host better than Twilight so I'm happy you decided to write for it. |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/14/2009 aww this was cute! |