Shsmehoshsheysbskshsnususgsysbakkdkfkckfkaysbsj drbkdidndbehshsh I JUST CHOKED! That is the biggest cliff hanger ever in life and I LOVE IT!

Awesome and thrilling story... Just binge read the whole thing...

Just a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Basilisk not Basalisk. And, for grammar, when a character says someone’s name, it should be followed up by a comma. For example; Eileen, I’m engaged! Or something like that. I love the plot and story though!

please please continue. this is so good

Holy crap... I literally couldn’t make myself put this down once I started. Brava!

A very Stocktonesque ending; however, having 110K words leading to that cliffhanger is a little cruel to your readers. Nonetheless, I wish you the best of luck with your sequel. I suspect it will be problematic for a number of reasons, not the least of which is plot-continuity. Still, all the best as you continue your tale. You may want to remove it from the romance list; it's more angst/tragedy than romance/tragedy.

once again.. we have a trained army.. 50 army wizards surrounding 10 school kids and losing..

fuck this. that's not nice.

I dont know from where should I start? There's so much wrong in this fic. That chapter in which Tom slaps Hermione and says yes I hit you and I dont care that you're a female is so wrong in so many levels. Are you certain that TMR will do that even Voldemort haven't hit physically any female death eater or muggle in entire HP series. Even in case of lily he asked her to sidestep and didn't pushed or hit her which showed that he didn't used violence against women. I read another review where it was said ' atleast he healed the brusies he had given her' and I was like WHAT? Its a reverse psychology abuse. Crucio can be used as it was using magic but really getting so violent. Is Hermione has become tomb raider? Using so many weapons and combative abilities. Don"t even start on Snape and Draco as they've became very OOC also. Where's the advantage of her future knowledge? If I had to see Hermione failing again and again without any hope. This is actually a catastrophic fic with an abusive mental and physical torture altogether. What is the point if Hermione has no advantage or even not using her famous brain. I didn't signed uo for reading a dysfunctional abusive harassing one sided relationship to be called 'romance'. What a joke for a fiction! Have you read Hermione in HP where she's fights for elves rights so are you sure she will accept this sham of abusive love? Are you an abuser or torturer? See yourself to a psychatrist immediately! Get well soon!
Warning- If you want to waste your time reading a cracked up physically abusive TMR and Tomb raider who accepts such abuse and have zero brain with only the name Hermione than you can read this.

wtf

I've read and enjoyed some of your other stories, and I love the idea of Severus and Draco going back in time with Hermione. I find though that I'm distracted by time errors. No one from Grindelwald's army should be using sectumsempra because Snape invented it in the 70s. A wizard in the 1940s would not know what muggle ecstasy is. I could see a time traveler slipping up and using words like bimbo and Barbie doll, however, those aren't terms we see used in the wizarding world, and Hermione would know that a wizard in the 90s would not understand her comment. She'd also know that Barbie dolls weren't around in the 40s and surely would not trip up on something that simple. I know it seems a bit nitpicky, but these small details go a long way to creating a stronger story.

This story had me hooked since the first chapter. One of the things I love is that Hermione doesn’t come along, that really adds to the dynamic. And those plot twists! Amazing! I wasn’t expecting the first one with Cygnus but when Tom going out I was shocked and my heart beat so fast! I adore the characters as well, with their strengths and flaws, I can see them doing these actions. I also feel that you perfectly catch toms character, he is still charming but we never forget how dangerous and inhumane he is. I’m stopping this review here because after the cliffhanger i have to go and read the next book but thank you so much for letting me share Hermiones adventure.

Brilliant!

no why would u do this to me aghhh

nooooooo! please update!