I wish there was a way to give you a standing ovation. I think everyone on here should understand your troubles. Life can be a real bitch some days. I'll just say I really happy that you are trying to make a comeback.

You have an excellent chapter coming along. It's nice to see Peter's side of what is going on.

Keep trying. If anyone gives you grief for long absences I'll give them a piece of my mind.

~Angel

I totally understand your frustration with your schedule - 4 DAYS to read Moby Dick? Buckle down, finish the course! We will still be here when you come up for air! That's what Alerts are for!

Wonderful. I gotta say, this reunion addition to the story is awesome. Can't wait to see what his friends say when they hear who he ran into on his way to see them. :)

Keep up the great work.

MORE MORE MORE! :D

*Jumps around like a crazy lady* Yay! Update. Ooh interrogations! I feel sorry for the little boy though. I hope all goes well for him. The others not so much. And what is Edmund going to do with Mahir? Well, he got his second chance and took it for granted so I hope this time it will teach him a lesson. Anyways nicely done!

I'm going to pass over an advice I have received myself about 'weak' endings: it is usually best to have something in the ending recall the beginning, especially in one-shots!

Cliffhanger! Oh, I love this story so much, and I can't wait for the wedding!

Wow, interesting. I hope you update soon

I don't think I've reviewed yet. I LOVE your stories, they are absolutely incredible! You are an awesome writer!

WOW! That is the only word I can think of to sum up these latest chapters. Great job!

Looking forward to the next update! As usual ;)

Fan of the Just King.

Ah, so good! Please update soon! Pretty please?

Awwww. So sweet, I really like what you have going here, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm anticipating it almost as much as VoDT when it comes out for me tomorrow!

FotJK

Aw great chapter. I love how Edmund fought with Susan to let her go. Let's see what this wedding brings.

Accepted! And, NOW you know why you need to make a second, and maybe a third, backup off the computer every single day. At least email everything a copy to yourself every night. Get a free account somewhere to use just for such storage. Or, write a disk?

Congrats on finishing namowrimo. I'm not going to make it, but I'm going to slog on because I'm really happy with what I have so far.

Maybe Edmund should have the horn for now on. Anyways, it was another great chapter. You do a good job Pariah. :)