Reviews for Button Up Your Overcoat
WendyCR72 chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
Wow, seven years without ever seeing this! Late-night browsing has its rewards. This was GREAT. And yet still in character. Wish you'd write a bit more for these two! But thanks for this. Also loved the bleak/sad "Never, In Extremity" by you, too.
HeathRowTottie chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Adorable, sweet, sexy and fun. Just what I needed to salve my wounded heart after reading your Below the Shadow of a Dream!
smkbutterfly69 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Wow. That was hot. Great story. I loved the little boy whine at the end about being wet. Funny...and realistic.
atheneblue chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Cute without being fluffy, and the overcoat sitch is hot. -ab
movieholic chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
That was amazingly sexy. Not where I thought it was going, but I'm glad it went there. Amazing.
The Confused One chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
OH! OMG! That was...different. I love it. :) I certainly have my hopes about what is to come that night, besides the chili. :) Fabulous work. :)
WordsmithGrl chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Oy, and you write Goren & Eames too? You'll be the ruin of me. I am so jealous of your way with words.
superfelix chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
“You got room in there for me?”...Oh, this is good...really good!

Oh dear the picture you describe...mhm, so lovely...Alex cocooned in Bobby's warmth and feeling save.

So much closeness lets Bobby react...wohoo! Oh dear, Alex heighten the pressure. This is mean.

Dear...so quickly...Bobby couldn't hold it. “Long time?” Great! I like so much, that for Alex is everything okay. They share caresses but then Mike interrupts...shit.

She released him and he cries like a baby because of his coat...men!

Wonderful end...a diner by Bobby. Which women could say no to such an invitation? I couldn't and Alex shouldn't.

Very sweet little one. I appreciate it.
Noname84 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Naughty but nice!

I enjoy your grip on words. Very nice style, descriptive, suggestive, but not blunt.
Ilanamiza chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
You've just restored my faith in alleys. LOL! Goren and Eames rock!
sky m chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
nice one!... I would love to see your take on what happens next!, sequel?

thanks for sharing
Humor In A Bittersweet Life chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
That was very ... ah ... naughty. Nice!
OuroborosSnyder chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Oh, I really liked this )

~Snyder~
cifan chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
that was fun and sexy and naughty and hot!
The Mominator chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
I really enjoyed that, fine work.
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