Nice!

I really loved your style is great and your grasp of Eliot is perfect!

Nicely done.

loved it

A really good story, I loved it.

I thought this was adorable. It's a little confusing-the timeline is hard to follow; is there some formatting that didn't transfer.-but I loved the dynamic between Parker and Eliot. I especially loved the little insights into Eliot's mind; there are certain thoughts you show that make a lot of sense, like the part where he hadn't forgotten how to care for a woman, but he'd given up trying.

I really liked this. Thank you for writing it. :)

-aislinn gesine (I'm too lazy to login :D)

I was a little confused as to where the transitions were, but this was great!

Do you even have any IDEA how amazing this piece is?

I kinda hope not, or else you'd have to have the biggest head on the freakin' planet.

Seriously, this is-WOW!

reading this story to "glory box" by portishead is pure sex. and quite amazing, at that.

that was great loved it

Enjoyed. :)

Great story!

Awesome job !

AH. this was so good. the little bit about eliot's past was well written and realistic and not whumpy and overdone, and it was great! and parker is such a badass, i cannot even explain; you wrote it so plausibly that i have no problem with her fighting, though sometimes that seems unrealistic. and you wrote the sex well-just enough detail and no sloppy overdone language. perfect. keep it coming.

Loved this. No other words for it.