AW! This is so sweet! I love the Henry/Shawn aspect of the show, and this captures it perfectly. I definitely would have loved to see this in the episodewell done!

Man I Wish They Had Put More Emphasis On Shawn's Injury's They Always Down Play Them. I Mean There's Only Been Really One Hospital Scene That I've Seen In ALL 6 Seasons, & That Was When Shawn Got His Appendix Burst. Totally Not Fair.
But Enough Of My Gripping. Great Job! XD

just what i needed, thank you

This should've been the end of the episode! Great job!

I would bet Shawn had a concussion after those hits...and as for the medical knowledge, it is usually an hour or two (I can't even fall asleep in 15 minutes). This episode was on so I had to check out any 'extras' that people wrote. I like how you gave it from Henry's POV. Nice job. 10/10

Great job!

This was what I would have loved to see on tv. Thanks for writing.

Oh, it was so cool. )

I just have seen the episode and couldn't do anything else, than see that little scene btw shawn and henry again and again! So damn cute! I love your story, hope there's more in at your profile. ;-)

Greetings from Germany,

Milu

Nice "missing scene" story. Henry was very sweet ... I could almost picture him, after he got over being stunned that Shawn almost fainted, to just "walk it off or something". But I like the side of him you showed... especially him all worried that Shawn might have been hit when he hurt the gunshot.

You got all the concussion stuff right on, and I speak as the unofficial holder of the prize for 'most head injuries' in, well, pretty much everyone I know. (Put it this way; me, cars, chairs and walls really don't get along.)

Anyway, love the way you write Henry; seems just like the sort of thing he'd be thinking, much better than I can do. :)

-Kimly

Nicely done. I like seeing things through Henry's eyes. The only technical I had a problem with is "every fifteen minutes"? I would go once an hour, if I were you.

You should post this on Psychfic.

Sweet! I love stories highlighting Henry's better side, and his concern/love for Shawn. This was well-written and the perfect fit for the episode. Great job.

Oh, I love Henry as a good Daddy fics! Shawn whumping is a bonus, though! Muy excellante!