I love your story

Super cute fic! I do agree with some of the other comments, though; Vegeta does not seem to be in character, especially not for this point in the timeline. To me this story is more like a slightly altered AU.
But great writing and great grammar, thanks for all your hard work!

Correction...seeing infinite amount of violet not violent. Sorry... the ending was so breathtaking.

Beautiful...I’m seeing an infinite amount of violent!
“Violet Means You Love Me” *sniffles*

Sooo, like, when are we getting back to the garden? Lol. This is pretty entertaining but I really want them to go back to toiling soil! Love the way you write, hope you decide to write more about these two.

although Vegeta seemed a bit OC, your fic was engaging from,start to,finish. I especially loved the chapter where Bulma says that she would give him the moon because he deserved it. all she wanted is that he respect her. it was quite moving.

let them fuck each other

You have Vegeta down extremely well! I can't stop laughing it. Fantastic chapter.

amazing story. loved it

the thing I like the most about this story is how you handled Vegeta's feelings, how they changed. It felt so natural. Beautiful

woah I was NOT expecting that. Great chapter. And oh my god Yamcha was an ass

holy shit

your writing is so captivating

Vegeta calling Bulma by her name A
you know, I don't think the virginity thing changes the story that much, because it would have been 100% normal for her not to want to have sex with Veggie if they didn't have a relationship or didn't love each other. Her past relationship with Yamcha looks kinda shallow the way you write you know. She says she's waiting for love, for the right guy, so you're telling me she never, not even for a short amount of time, felt this way about him? anyway, I just think that the conflit didn't need this. she could have "refused" vegeta for other reasons.

Bulma teasing him was pretty silly. I like how things turned out tho