okay so i finally got onto a demons story :)

its good, you captured the characters well and i liked how ruby called mina bitchy :)

i am thinking your theory was that glavin killed lukes dad? this is a bit conflicted in luke's mind though as i can see.

of course now we know that galvin didnt kill lukes dad but at the time it was a distinct possibilty- still liked the switching of the points of view :)

keep writing :) and well done for picking up on the story line for the 5th and 6th episodes before they happened lol :)

I am not entirely sure about where you are going with this 'theory'. I assume that by now you must have seen the entire series and learned who was responsible for the death of Luke's father and more about Mina.

The conversation between Luke and Ruby seems a little awkward and contrived. Considering they have been friends since childhood, it seems unlikely that Ruby would not know that Luke's Father was dead.

I am sorry if this seems over critical, I don't mean it to be. Please don't let it stop you continuing to write. We all need to learn and grow and the best way to get better at something is to practice. I think it takes courage to post your work for the appraisal of others so well done for having a go.

I have not only watched the show, I bought it on DVD and have watched the whole thing from start to finish several times. I do hope they will make another series.

Good luck and keep writing

So after watching all 6 episodes, your partly right. I really hope with the annoucement at ITV on their budget they dont hold off making a second series. There are still so many questions but hopefully fanfiction will see us through till then.

BTW- good job, hope you've got some more stories to come.

ooh, I watch demons too 'ss very good, shame its finished though... maybe they'll make another series...

anyway, nice set of theories, didn't notice most of those things, like the timeline. My theories were that galvin had killed luke's father, that galvin was a half-life and that thrip was (somehow) luke's father P

heh, I like theories, it's always interesting to see what other people think

I've been the same as you, I've been wandering what the big secret is but can't quite figure out what it might be. However this week episode looks very interesting, unfortunatly i'm going to miss it because i'm working :(

Anyway, look forward to you updating your story

I watch it! Dont worry, there are people in the world who do. Are you from Britain then?

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i watch it! btw - it is really good!

this was intriguing! i've been browsing some stuff and you've got some really interesting ideas...

I watch this! :D

this is the first i have read for this and it is so gd! grt job:D

Hi This is good you should carry on. There are quite a few good Demons stories out there the best one is called 'Bite me' There are a lot of sites for Demons. My fav is the Galvin one as he is my fav charater. Demons is getting better each week, the charaters are coming to life so to speak. Anyway hope they do another series!

Guess what? I watch Demons too! D

There are quite a few people who watch the show but they probably won't have started writing about it yet - there have only been four episodes!

I think this is great and I've put you on alert so I can read the rest after every episode. Don't stop writing because it seems to be abandoned here - people will arrive and then you will have the first story on here! Yay!

I'll be back...

great fic, hopefully some of these questions will be answered as the series progresses, although there's only a few episodes left. Hope to see more demons fics from you soon!

I watch Demons - mainly for Phillip Glenister but it is growing on me. I liked your ideas about the characters and I agree the timelines seem wrong, may be it'll be cleared up by the end of the series. Until then it gives us lots of scope for our own fiction.

well i think your on the right track, its gonna be interesting seeing how it all unfolds over the next two episodes. Great bit of writing by the way. Maybe luke will find out soon and Thrip will try and get him on side against Galvin! Loving the show but have to say i find Ruby damn irritating.

Oh the first Demons fic! Ive been waiting for someone to start writing these, s much potential!

This is really good and I like your theories.

Hope you write more. I would like someone to write about Luke and Mina together, they seemed destined to me and Ruby is just far too irritating for my liking, but thats just my opinion lol.

But yeah, very good, loved it :)