Please continue! I'm hooked!

BLOODY BRILLIANT(:

I love your story, it's really very interesting! I see you haven't updated in more than 2 years, buuuuut doesn't mean you can't start up again? xD I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound like one of those annoying reviewers that are all up in your face every day, totally guilt-tripping you, and are like, "Y ARENT U UPDATING, RLY UNCOOL MAN. UPDATE DAMMIT. YOU PROMISED BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH" (ughh). But I will say that I hope you haven't totally given up on this one.

I'll be keeping watch for when you update. Thank youuu!

Sincerely,

Doomster345 _

Wow... this is WICKED awesome! Please update soon!

Oh! good story! please please PLEASE update! ! !

Shawn...having an arch nemesis is not a good thing to have lol! God that was so funny! and Shawn singing to Gus haha! I don't know how you keep everyone in character! Amazing!

I like it so far! Love Shawn with his father, not enough written that it includes them together. Hope you have more soon!

uhh..nice...nice..:D great work!

I like the idea of a singing Shawn xD (his eyes closed and in full ‘annoy Gus’ mode).

That's so characteristic for him...

uhm...ya...please update soon!

luv

I love that Shawn's excited about having an arch nemesis. And alphabet code on steroids!

Update soon.

-Kimly

Brilliant - I love the comments Shawn makes, and you had them all very in character.

*goes off to read more...*

-Kimly

he has an arch nemesis.. and he's GLAD? that's Shawn for you, i guess. this is gonna be interesting.

ps. i like how the reason he was called in there first place( the necklace) is completely irrelevant to the REAL story. or is it? hmm

HNA

Love the direction it's going in-Keep it up. D

Wow, Shawn being excited about having an arch nemesis was just perfect! I'm looking forward to more!

awesoem, i love "let explore the issues between Shawn and his father" fics. Especially the ones that end in "they really just care about each other too much, but neither of them lead quiet lives"

so, kudos

SHINY!

this is good- continue please!

Hee! I like this. It has a great balance between humor and dark foreshadowing. (dum dum dum...) I thought it was a oneshot at first, and for some reason I thought it would be Henry who wanted to measure himself against Shawn. It goes with the humor, right? But then I realized that it was actually a serious threat. Either way, it's still intruiging!