LMAO at the Omake. And the fic was pretty damn good too XD

Wow ... Nao. I mean don;t get me wrong I love the story I really do ... I just had no clue it was Nao!

Either way keep writing I love your style its quite refreshing to see someone who can keep your attention the entire story.

Oh my, I couldn't help but re-read this story again *coughiwasboredcough* and officially reviewing it. :D I have noticed that you revised a bit which is good but I still see Natsuki in Nao's role. T_T

Overall, this is a very well written piece even though you still haven't correct your misused / misspelled words yet. LOL Awesome job and love the omake...hm maybe we can try reenacting the scene. hehehe

Wow, I love you.

You really should do more 'taboo' couples. Like...Midori and Mai.

LOLZ.

~ManiazAzn

It was a brilliant story, just like all of your other works. Surely I had thought it was another ShizNat - the sole reason why I'm even this fanfiction world - but Nao and Shizuru is just as lovely. I love this couple and am really happy to find that you also think the same. They work better than NaoNat, don't you think?

Unfortunately that not so many people out there think so... All the more reason for me to treasure a NaoxShiz story like this.

Back to "Fated love", I think it is pretty bittersweet (sweet more!)and lovely. If only you'd given more screentime for Shizuru then it'd be perfect . I love the poem you wrote here, allow me to copy it in my blog please? I'll be sure to give clear credit to you of course.

Hope to see another work from you! And thank you for this too.

ShizNao? Totally caught me off guard! I usually don't read stories with this pairing, but then, after reading this, I realized they don't look that bad together. -scratches head-

So mysterious-feeling! Reading this made me feel like crying for some reason. o.o

Haha I'm a risk taker, and I'm glad I took the risk in reading this one. Beautifully written, you got me in the end with the Nao thing lol. Thing was, I had to re-read from the beginning because I had the wrong person in mind, and wanted to correct it. Omake was funny too, I'd jump after my super big, pink fluffy bunny as well... OK maybe not but I surely would go after it :P

haha you totally got me, and that was a really beautifully written piece btw. Clever too

*catches the author from her fall*

Although I was shocked by this pairing, it did feel right. I re-read it and placed Natsuki's name instead of Nao, it was a little different.

K-chan, why didn't you pair yourself up with Shizuru?

On second thought,

don't you dare!

Mine!

My K-chan!

P

now, all jokes aside. Talking about the story, it had this subtleness in it, it flowed, but it was calm, not jumpy, or anything as such.

I liked how the two showed affections and Shizuru was Shizuru as we all depict her to be, soft, warm and loving Shizuru.

Nao was different though. She was mature of course because of her age.

You see normally in stories as such when they have Shizuru at such a mature level, they place Natsuki at such a mature level too.

But you've done a wonderful job with Nao's character, and I'm so happy about this fic.

Good job K-chan.

This was a beautiful piece.