Reviews for The Beginning
apples123 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
that was really god(:
James5 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I liked how you conveyed Josh's emotions, particularly when he talks about feeling an energy and excitement while talking to her. Good job overall.
Sarah-Blureberry chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Aww. that was so cute. I loved it.
Poisoned Black Rose chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
This is way good :D *thumbs up*
Rebecca Bookie chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
aww I love it write more soon!
Privateserieslvr chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
OMG! Loved it! Do something in another chapter from like untouchable! that would be great! :]
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
aww that's so cute. he really likes Reed and is falling. i loved his thoughts.