this is one of the first good collabs i have ever read normally the authors styles contrast to much and the story is to overwhelming but you guys worked perfectly together. very good!

great job!

OME! Dacing with Edward is awesome. I wanna dancing with him! ehhehehe

Love the story. Reaally great!

Congrats

That was so good x

lol, nice )

:D I never reviewed our awesome collab.

Whoa!

That sets whole new standards for dancing! I was listening to that salsa song while I was reading, I was all but dancing in my chair. Haha, it's such a sexy song. Absolutely perfect. Well done! Both of you! Can't wait to read more from you two brilliant writers!

Methinks I need to go dancing sometime soon. ;-) Sexy. Good work ladies! You should work together again.

Very nice, LadyInBlue and Rosette-Cullen. Good idea, spelling, and grammar. I’m glad that you two kept the story flowing smoothly. Sometimes with two authors, you can tell because of different styles of writing. While here I could see the different styles, it wasn’t distracting. I liked how the last two lines of dialogue were the same as the first two. An all in all well done one-shot.

loved it!