Huh.
Just when I thought that ass-of-an-imp did it...
Meh.

Cute! This is a good lemon

It's good

U R SO AWESOME! THE ENDING WAS THE GREATEST THING IN THE WORLD! oh gosh and the story was beautiful

Its like their souls are saying "FINALLY!"

this was reeeeally great! keep up the good work :)

You know the funniest part about this is how much you say kami. Kami , although it does mean god(and hair) is makas moms name

so cute.

that was really good and good job bringing the souls into it

That was very good. It was well written and I really liked the idea behind the dreams.

I Loved It though im not a pervert. Just saying u should work on ur spelling, but the rest was perfect. ) i hope u keep writing bcuz there should b more soulxmaka stories. all the ones about soul and maka being withother people SUCK! I like this one-shot the most so I'm adding it to my favorites.I hope u write more stories and i hope they're about soul and maka in love. they just make a great couple don't u think? well of course u do if u didn't u wouldn't have written this AWESOME story! so yeah keep writing and the best of luck whoever u are!

Oh noz, not again! DX

lololol

if they do this in the last episode i will friggin' fall out X3

aww, it's so cute!

truthfully, i only saw like two of the episodes of Soul Eater, but i sorta thought that maka and soul would be a good pairing! so...do they like, like each other later or something?

i know its not for kids but it was soo awsome! all the time i was reding i was all like "kya! he loves her!" "kya! she loves him back!" it was so amasing!

Omg! Kawaii desu yo! That was so sweet, then again I'm a sucker for SoulxMaka pairings. And the imp talking to Soul at the end was hillarious. One question though, how old are they supposed to be? Cause I think (not exactly sure, rough guess here) in the show they're like 13-15 which is kinda young. Not really sure though, how old dod you mean for them to be?