If you are going to have a scene like that at the very beginning of your story, PLEASE be sure to put a warning of some sort. It can and will cause issues with readers and make many of us not want to have anything to do with you simply because of that. Now, I'm not trying to sound rude or anything. I actually like most of your ShikaNaru stories but I am unable to even get past the first chapter for this one, due to me personally having an extreme aversion to anything to do with that particular situation. No, it wasn't in explicit detail but it is still easy enough to grasp what occurred. It still allowed me to picture it in my head to the point of me feeling sick to my stomach and immediately become repulsed. I know it was unintentional to do this, but I'm sad to say that I will never be reading this story.

Please update soon, this is story is getting really interesting at the moment! Well I'll wait til it comes _

please update this story soon

How about nyow?

Chu update soon?

I love this, Shikamaru despite his lazy attitude seems to care so much, he just doesn't show it through his expression & but rather through his actions :) Btw, I really like the beginning so please continue to write this story and don't ever give up no matter what other people say! It's your story so you can do what you want, don't focus on others ;)

This is an uber sweet story so far! And I really hope your laptop is fixed soon so you can start writing/posting/updating your marvelous fics again! I really like your writing style, it's much better than my amateur one. And the plots are so super adorable! They make my never-ending moe-love for Shika even larger than it already is! I cannot wait till your next update!

it's intersting...and cool
i love dark fics

I love it so far, can't wait for the next update! Poor naru, if it happens a lot to her wouldn't she be able to hide how afraid she was or is it because she was just raped that she is reacting so bad to it?

again, i hope you can get your laptop fixed and/or het a new one

hope you can get a new one

It's been a year! :) Are you coming back to this story? *puppy eyes* Puhhhleeeez?

Love the shikanaru pairing:)

Hope you update soon!

so when do you plan to update this story? it seems like it will be a good one...

i really love all ur stories please update

Please continue when you can!