Thanks for the story. Enjoyed it.

Shouldn’t Bella be saying “Come and pick me up and take us out of here?” Well hopefully that part will go without saying. I understand Carlisle can’t be there but he promised Edward’s safety. He should at least warned Alice to look out for him.

Mmmmmmmm...

Her action? You mean Tanya’s actions.

Not really liking Jacob.

Alice wouldn't be able to see Bella's future because she can't see the baby's future. You obviously didn't read the the books.

The Volturi. Not the Volturis. Did you even read the books?

It's too much that Edward flew to Denali on the exact day that Edward arrives. Kinda ruins the story a bit because there's just no way that would ever happen.

Bella parents are a little sanifcant wow howbselfish can she be. Poor Charlie must be worried sick wow some daughter Bella turned out to be.

So good!

I’m intrigued! Can’t wait to read more!

Just read this story again a few after first reading it. And I didn't receive Spanish was your first language and English the second. I read that in your last chapter. You really didn't a great job I couldn't even tell English was your first language when reading this.
Anyway just thought I should let you know what a great job you did.

Good story

Awesome story! I really liked the part where eliza froze bella during the I do's. Hilarious! Thankyou so much for sharing.

I was enjoying this story intill Bella made this stupid decision. Now they have to stay with the Volterrie wow what a way to put them both in danger. I dont know if i will continue.