thaanks for reviewing my story ! :)

anywaays i loved this..

well done...

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This was awesome!

Wow! Your right I LOVE it ]

WOW! Great Story

Wow, that was seriously one of the best stories that I have ever read, I totally loved it. Though the ending was kind of sad, but it made the story even better(

Nice story! thanks for reviewing mine ] if you get a chance check out my other story "The last bow" thanks.

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Hey there! Great story! I thought it's one of the story with the happy ending. I got surprised with how it ended... It's a good kind of surprise in terms of writing.

Great story! Thanks for all the support.

Bella

i like the idea, but not a batista fan...the begging was a little too unrealistic for me...and i think you should have split this into a chaptered fic it was too long and it jumped aroun din time too much. Great expresiion of emotion... the last line was my favorite part, "She would always push him away" VERY POWERFUL sentence, i loved it. Dont stop writing :)

wow that was really good I hope Lita will finally let Batista in.

Aww. Poor dave

I liked this. I'm not a big Dave/Lita fan, like i said, but it was good. Nice work

This was really good. The plot line was very well planned, and your grammar was better than a lot I've seen.

My only suggestion to you is that you split the story into chapters next time. It's very difficult to read a story straight through from start to finish when it's done out like this, because if you have to stop, you have to find where you were again, and it's simpler to do that if you have it in chapters.

Now, for the real story comments.

This was so good! The couple was a little odd to me, I've never read one of these, and usually I'm not one for straight pairings, but this was so good! And the ending was unexpected. I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

Nice story. I've never really thought about a Lita/Batista pairing, but I think it's a great one, especially when you put it against the backdrop of Evolution.

FANTASTIC writing; you really know how to describe emotions and sensations. I was completely sucked in.

Anyway, great fic! Keep up the great work-and thanks for the reviews!

This is the author Trish and Her Many Fine Men. I'm using my cousin's profile to review again. I thought when Dave and Amy kissed the story was gonna end happy, so I stopped, but then I realized it wasn't when Dave was left standing by himself in the locker room. Great story even if it was a sad ending.

Aw. It was happy ending for Dave and Amy. I never really actually paid close attention to this pairing, but you made me realize they're a pretty cute pairing. Great story.

That was a great story. Really long for a one shot, but still great.