Reviews for First Time |
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quarterdark chapter 1 . 4/6/2010 awesome :) |
Watermelon Kiss chapter 1 . 3/31/2010 I love this. And I disagree with you when you say you need to write more mature stuff; although a kiss is the only lovey-dovey thing you have here, it's so... sensual. Without being over the top with the details. Love this so much. |
ChasingProse chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 Great. But decidedly not a K. |
moonlight ookami chapter 1 . 3/29/2009 oh boy,that was hot. |
Miss Hydrangea chapter 1 . 3/10/2009 Perhaps it should be rated a bit higher than K? It seemed to be sensual and charged, despite there only having been a kiss. Haha, I suppose it's a talent, to infuse a kiss with such sensuality, without needing to describe all the slobbery details. |
Sparkling Silver Moon chapter 1 . 3/6/2009 Awwh, this is so cute :] & it leaves it open to so much more! Haha, damn. Kakashi totally liked it, hehe :) This storry made me all giggly. :D |
almost-moon chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 You know, I usually hate KakashiSakura pairings, but... i like it x] OK, I really liked it, haha Short and sweet and like the other comment, I also love Kakashi's hesitance Kudos xx ] |
lll chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 Oh my god, this is so, so perfect! I LOVE it! Especially Kakashi's hesitance, lol. |