you know, for me not being a fan of tragedy, this was written perfectly. it's beautiful and sad.

Hi

Nice little one shot. I'm not a big fan of tragedy, but it's not innately bad.

The quality was good in many areas; good narration, interaction, dialog, drama and emotion.

Some of the character portrayal is good, some areas felt...a little off.

The basic story is sad, but realistic. We like happy endings, but that's not always the case.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

I was crying through the whole thing!

TwiTragic13

xo

Aww, so sad!

That was so sweet and good. *wipes away tear*

That was so AWESOME!

Thanks for the great read,

Watcher

Nicely done, but I have to say that EVERYONE always kills off Diana. She never just leaves to go back to Theymiscria or Bruce never dies and she is the one to mourn. I enjoyed your story but I wish that someone would do it differently once in a while.

Defintitly well written. Such a horrible death for Diana, you'd think the league would of been more careful of where to land. It just shows that nobodies perfect.

omg im crying. poor bruce. my heart aches for him.

So sad, sniff sniff, but beautifully written. Thank you.

Wow, this story was SO awesome. You almost made me cry. Thanks for the totally amazing read. This is definitely going on my favorites list!

-M3

*sniffle* That was SO SAD! OH BRUCE! That was an AWESOME story! :D

Perfect ending! Really well done.

Such a wonderful, sad story. I can see it happening that way, too - I think Diana is more important to Bruce than either of them realise. Very well written :)