really liked this story keep it up

why I your pic of a lama

Why do all stories with abuse have her and Edward fall in love so quickly? Hell, I'm the canon they didn't fall this quickly. I love after one day? Fuck out of here. Done with this story.

This bullshit. None of the asslicking mutts deserve to be forgiven and should have been destroyed. They are nothing more than wife beating abusive mother fuckers. They attacked without provocation. According to the treaty the cullens have a right to kill the wolves.

These are the weakest vamps I have ever read about. I like your story but come on, it's all over the place. Jake beats Bella and when Edward and Charlie find out they don't kill him? They do nothing but say it'll be ok. The way it's written it's like the vamps are afraid of the wolves. Smh. Then Leah snatch vamp Bella out the house full of vamps and not one of them follow them? They just left her out there alone and stayed at the house. I've never wanted to hop in a story and beat the hell out of the characters so bad. Lmao. But like I said I do like your story and my comment is not to be mean or upset anybody.

Great story! Cant wait for another story!

OMG! this is a realy cool story

keep up the good work on your stories

amazing story! the beginning was a little confusing but it got a lot better over the chapters:) i loved it!

hi my name is alex rodriguez and i just started reading ur story and and i love it so far, but im just a little confused is edward a vampire or is he human?

awesome

wow it is really good like all of ur storys

wow, what a story, laugh, cry, hurt, get all hot, and bothered

Thanks for sharing!

Collar Idea? I think you mean CALLER ID...wow...you really need more than spellcheck.

What would be the harm of telling her father/Edward about Jacob. He'd just get put in jail and leave her alone. It may be a made up story but it's set in USA and there are laws that protect people from stuff like this happening over and over.

TAT WAS A SAD STORY I LOVEED IT BEST STORY I READ SO FAR