Reviews for One Step at a Time
Child of Dreams chapter 10 . 8/23/2014
(squeals in excitement)
I vote for HarryxJacob!
MisoaUzuki chapter 10 . 6/4/2014
Oh shut the fuck up 'GUEST'!your so fucking annoying!you don't need to insult the least she did and effort to write a fan don't need to insult her.
DemeRain chapter 10 . 2/3/2014
Thanks for sharing.
Assassin of the Shadows chapter 10 . 1/25/2014
See, I've read all your stories, and wasn't sure about this one. Not for the fandom, but the age of the story and it still not being completed... You said you have no intention of finishing this story because you've matured and no longer like it; honestly this is what intrigued me. Your other stories were wonderfully written so I was curious to see what your first would be like. I found it lovely; the detail you've put into Harry's condition is refreshing. Most (sick/ill) Harry stories are vague and show no depth of emotion. You have that here, and it also has that teen struggle with sexual curiosity which again is refreshing to read. If you do choose to continue with this story in the future I want you to know I'll be waiting for it.
eveemars87 chapter 10 . 1/11/2014
Please update this story again...
On another note, did you ever think about a Harry/Sherlock story?
rosa chapter 10 . 11/27/2013
I like the story and hope you update soon.
deathlover25 chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! :D
Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
deterrent to readers whom HATE the b*tch..You're trying too hard and it's making US/ME hate her guts more..Your characterization of her is disgusting..She is utterly more disgusting in your story then most others. No-body likes a nosy, obnoxious busy-body..Reason why that knowitallwh*reb*Tchheromeo is so disliked..

Oh and if you're going for the whole opposite/hate attracts..Well, I'm not seeing any kind of sparks/romance of any kind..All I see between them is, one annoying b*tch and Draco, well, Draco's just Draco!

I believe it's your bad writing..

Lastly, IT'S RUDE TO ASK A PERSON, ESP ONE THAT YOU'VE JUST 'MEET' IF HE/SHE IS GAY OR SO INCLINED IN ONE WAY OR ANOTHER..What is wrong with you/bella!

You have so many flaws it's just laughable..Could you imagine, meeting someone for the FIRST time and being asked what pjbelel is doing to Harry. NO! So, what makes you think YOUR FF story will be welcomed! 'Shakeshead'..

Oh and she's NOT intelligent enough..YOU TRY TOO HARD, which is just destroying this story but well, the story is crap to begin with..
Guest chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
YOU know, just the fact that you have pjbelal the way she is, is a deterrent to readers
Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
You have a few flaws in this story..First off, doesn't Harry have a GENETIC fault from a gene in the Black family and you calling it a disease doesn't sound right?

Secondly, you have 'plainjanebelaa' too nosy, to obnoxious and a freaking B*TCH of an attitude towards DRACO for the so called 'slight' against the b*tch! It really isn't any of her business YET for them just meeting you have HER pry into Harry's and co life just for the heck of it and Harry, just telling her his life! It's pathetic and just too forced..I mean, it seems as thou YOU want the b*tch to know everyone's secret later on or something..It just reads MAJORLY OBNOXIOUS and a B*TCH!
V. L. Crawford chapter 10 . 7/3/2012
Well this story is great so far. Hopefully you will update it soon.
V. L. Crawford chapter 9 . 7/3/2012
Yeah the Malfoys might cause them a little problem.
V. L. Crawford chapter 7 . 7/3/2012
Great chapter.
V. L. Crawford chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
Well that meeting went better than any I've read.
V. L. Crawford chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
Tiger-haired boy? LOL!
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