Hahaha! Optimus needs a vacation... Oh, dear ol' Dino, ya never fail... :)

Oh my stars, this is excellent! DinoTrap is my secret, slightly dirty, but the good dkind of irty, guilty pleasure. Haha! Awesome job! Love this!

I normally do not enjoy poetry, but maybe it is writing poetry that I don't enjoy, and I think reading this made me realize that, so I owe you a review (and a thank you). Thank you, this is beautiful, and I enjoyed every word. I got fangirl shivers while reading "First to accept him, last to admit it." Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

great poem got a laugh out of optimuse needing a vacation witch in all of reality propaly does put still great peom

I hate this lousy excuse of a fic. It sucks!

I don't like it. ;(

Ah, I forgot just how much I'd missed poetry.

This was absolutely lovely, great job.

Deep. I usually don't like poem ficlets, but this one's good!

That was very beautiful! And a wonderful read! Great job! Lots fun!

My favorite line was "Dinobot knows circles, and that Optimus needs a vacation." A wonderful line! Great job!

Wow so deep, I really liked it alot there is never enough dinobot/rattrap out there which is really sad...

rofl he does need a vacation..

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I loved this! It was amazing! It was poetry and...and yet it was still like I was reading a story. Circles are fascinating, I think. They represent *so* much...

And Dinobot! And Rattrap! This felt a lot like Dinobot, actually, this poem. I could read it, and even if you replaced the words with something less Transformer-like, I would still get the Dinobot-vibe off of it.

:D

Optimus does need a vacation, Dinobot old buddy, old pal, but sadly, if people have their way, he'll never get it. Optimuses don't get vacations, even when they're *dead* (no wonder Primal seemed so grumpy when he came back)

Hee! *sticks poem in the favorites immediately*

HOW DO I BEGIN?

YOU ARE MANY BRANDS OF AWESOME. AND. SO IS DINOBOT! HOW YOU MANAGED TO SQUEEZE SO MANY POSSIBLE MEANINGS OF "CIRCLE" INTO ONE FIC, I DON'T KNOW. I DON'T CARE. YOU MANAGED TO PUT EVERYTHING IN HERE. I CAN SEE MY OWN IDEAS IN IT. OH, MAN. I AM DEAD OF CAPSLOCKING SQUEELOVE.

DINOBOT IS AWESOME. AND RATTRAP IS HIS. AND IT'S POETRY. LAWL.