Reviews for Watch Me Shine |
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chellewasson chapter 11 . 8/7/2017 Love the story. I thought Sam Trueheart was Tommy's grandfather. |
KyokoHatake-Uchiha chapter 8 . 9/9/2016 Really loving this story so far. But I think they're moving to fast. She just got raped a week ago, if he's her soul mate it takes longer than that for her to recover if being violated so recently. And if her and Tommy have sex before she gets a rape kit done it could mess with the evidence and they're case could go all wrong. |
kimanndtommy chapter 23 . 5/30/2015 The story it so long. End don't have and ending. |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 5 . 3/24/2015 Jason should be relieved that Tommy got Kim pregnant rather than Demetrius getting her pregnant. |
RangerBride78 chapter 30 . 9/12/2014 Awesome story |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 23 . 8/1/2014 At least th |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 22 . 8/1/2014 cliffhangers are good for books, some movies, and some games. |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 9 . 7/30/2014 Ya know, the guy who rescued those three girls in Cleveland did not get charged with breaking and entering. I would guess circumstances negate the charges. |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 14 . 7/9/2014 Jason: Whipped Tommy: Virgin Kim: Owned Trini: Not for long Me: XD |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 20 . 4/7/2014 Endless love just fits. You never really see a song in books due to legalities but when you do it just does not seem to fit. |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 3 . 3/3/2014 I am pretty sure that Zordon has a list of acceptable personal reasons to use the powers, the guy is not stupid at all. |
Great story chapter 30 . 2/9/2014 Loved the plot, the general ideas, and the conclusions. I'd love it more and enjoy it better without the spelling and grammar errors. I don't want to be over critical or diminish your story, but a reader better enjoys without this sort of errors. Thank you for the story. |
RaptorZeroOne chapter 6 . 2/6/2014 Knowing Tommy those babies will be late XD |
jwstahle chapter 4 . 7/8/2013 I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I am curious to know how Jason knows so much about handling a person after something like this happens. |
Opalbrat chapter 30 . 5/2/2013 Love this story. You did an amazing job. :) |