Slut-shaming, how delightful. Using the jealousy bit to get a boy to notice you because you "love" him is utterly ridiculous for any age and downright pathetic. Her confession was implausible. I understand it's a very juvenile fic but good lord.

This is an awesome AH story.

I think that Emmett should kick Jasper's ass for that!

Thank you for sharing.

I had no idea that you redid this story! I remember how it was originally so I was a little confused but I like this version too. Great job!

Hi! I love your story i check it everyday to see if you updated the sequel to this book, please please please update it i love love love you story's so much update all of them please please. Like have her have the baby she is pregnant with or have something happen (i don't want to tell you how to run your AMAZING story). But please do update it sometime soon, I LOVE LOVE you book!

I don't understand why they had to wait for the ultrasound. I get that you wanted to make us wait, but it is an ultrasound, she didn't need to be awake to here the twins' hearts. They could have been monitored while she was unconscious.

Emmett is just the best. Best reaction to the twins :D

Emmett bringing him back from the dead to kill him again was a very nice touch :D

Jasper's teasing was hot ;)

Writing his name...where do you get this ideas from? Never heard of THIS one before. Very original, I liked it :)

Why didn't she hit him? James I mean...I'm glad Jasper and Emmet did, but she should have gotten to do it first, dammit :(
Btw, I forgot it in the last chapter. How much money does Jasper have for fuck's sake? He spent 1000$ only on Rose and Edward, isn't he in high school? :D

I liked Jasper's reaction to her outfit and their little make-out session.

Why does Bella need advice though? In this chapter she sounds like she has zero experience. I thought she had a few relationships before? Edward and some other guy?

You might want to erase chapter 6, as chapters 7-9 are the same only more detailed. (and yeah there are some parts which don't match)
I like your story so far, apart from the present description. It is a whole passage where you just list things. It doesn't really add to the story, I only had the patience to read through it because I liked your writing so far. When other writers do it I just skip it, so feel free to feel special :D

I really hope James gets the part. He is a creep, but Jasper would deserve some torture. I don't particularly like him in the moment. He is still my favourite and I want them together, but I would have prefered it, if he suffered a little. I believe she forgave him to soon. Flirting/making out with a guy isn't a crime. She was single. Even if she liked Jasper, they weren't together. It was her right, it is biology actually. No reason to call her a slut. I don't think I would ever forgive my best friend/the guy I loved if he called me that and meant it at the moment, angry or not. You just don't do that. It is disrespectful. So since she didn't tell him to go to hell or didn'T grill him for ages, he deserves to be taunted by James and suffer during the play.
(I'm not judging you by the way, it is your story. If I was judging I wouldn't bother to comment I would just stop reading. Just voicing hopes and opinions :) )

leave it. it is perfect the way it is. another author did a sequel for their story and it sucks. another one also did one and I do NOT think I want to read it (laughs). this is a perfect story. I do suggest however another bella/jasper story. they are good.

i love it