Beautiful. Her torment is described so wonderfully.

This was very moving! Knowing what Rosalie wanted so much, but was denied, makes this "dream" so poignant. You found a good way for this "dream" to have even happened.

Wow this was great!

more plz

luvd the stry! r u gona continu?

God. That's so sweet, and so sad.

I was close to crying. This is really good (:

The dream was so picture perfect; it must have been hard for Rose to come out if it.

This was a wonderful story, great job.

Wait, ok. Let me see if I understand this correctly. Ok. So The italicized font is reality, and the regular font is a dream? Cause when the story started, I thought they were human, but apparently, they're vampires. Ok. I think I get this now. Either way, it's fantastic. I love anything Emmett and Rosalie, and this is no exception. Do you think you'll continue? Cause I read your other EmXR stories already :)

Aww, this is sad but so sweet!

oh! This is really unique! Love it!

This IS very beautiful and very sad.

this is so lovely...

i read it after Roses Behind Mirrors, i have to say i prefer your second one where the characters develop a bit more, but this one is still rly rly good.

the way you write reminds me of this book called the lovely bones - i dont know if you've read it. its really good.

Aw, I loved this story, it fit them perfectly. Great job!

Yay Rosalie angst! I don't know why, but I'm an absolute sucker for it. Which is saying a lot becaues I usually despise angst...

This was beautifully written and an interresting idea. Poor Rose. So bittersweet. Lovely little oneshot. I very much enjoyed it. Wonderful job.

Sincerely,

~FlamingRedFox

I am so sorry, I am too lazy to review but I just want to say that this is wonderful! Like you just captured Emmett and Rosalie so well! Ack, I love it!