| Reviews for Two Heartbeats: Princess Lament |
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  lalaland chapter 7 . 11/15/2019 Looking forward for the next chapter! |
| fcf chapter 1 . 10/9/2019 Will you continue? |
 rtfuywcokmql chapter 2 . 6/30/2016 Wait is Kuripika a GIRL?! |
| Hina-chan chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 Ohayoh Sweet heart was the kid Jura-chan or was it the baby it couldn't have been then he would be 4 and he is 10years older than that but he is sort enough to be but then again he could be lying in the show right? Right? anyways I amwriting this on an iPod touch so if a word is misspelled excuse it massen ka?arigatou |
| kigamin chapter 5 . 6/28/2010 Wow... So Alluka was part of the Genei Ryodan? Sugoi... I wonder why Nobu call her depart a betrayal... |
| kigamin chapter 4 . 6/9/2010 Genei Ryodan? wow... keep the good work! :) |
| kigamin chapter 3 . 6/9/2010 Killua is such a funny boy! XD Keep the good work! I'm waiting for your next upadtes :) |
| kigamin chapter 2 . 6/9/2010 I think you have a good english ) I'm sayin' "I think" because I'm not english, I'm french, so I don't know if I should judge XD |
| kigamin chapter 1 . 6/9/2010 Uwah! Very good! When I saw the word "eye", I thought I had not read correctly, or you had made a typo mistake, but then I noticed you emphasized the word... So if I understand well, the woman is Kikyo, Killua's mother, since she has only one "eye"... This beginning is sad... I really want to know what will happen! |
| GNDragon74 chapter 4 . 4/17/2010 OH I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS SO INTERESTING! Are you still writing it? If so who do you plan for Alluka to end up with if anyone? Just so I know what direction this fic is going. |
| sriracha style dad chapter 4 . 9/6/2009 Update or I'll go insane! Nyah! And Kalluto as a 'little miss' - epic win. ...and I believe that is all. G'bye!~ |
| felten chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 update update update update soon please! |
| Naura Sorusabaira chapter 4 . 8/1/2009 I'm here for the next review! (_) OK, let's start the review... Alluka knows the Genei Ryodan? Wow! It seems that the story line will be very interesting and complicated. "One name came to his mind. There’s only one person who’s brave enough to help them." Now, I'm wondering who this person is... (And still wondering even if I try to think about other things XD) Great storyline! Now I always wonder about what will happen next... Keep up the good work! (_) Good luck with the next chapter! Hang on! Special thanks for me? Your welcome! (_)And thank you for you too because you’re my first reviewer for my fan fiction: My Last Butterfly. (_) |
| Naura Sorusabaira chapter 3 . 7/26/2009 Hi! Actually, I read this fan fiction for a long time ago. But, I forgot to review... (-_-") I can't wait until Killua meet Alluka! (_) |
| Pochi-chan chapter 1 . 4/23/2009 erm... POSITIVE areas * very imaginative * intensifying NEGATIVE CRAP * contains some confusing grammar construction e.g. prepositional application * some parts are too specified try introducing the elements in a more non-redundant fashion to introduce individualism and produce your own writing style * i don't agree on the use of past tense all over the novel * yeah, this chapter is too short |
