A great story. Very well written.

more please

this almost made me cry, it was simply written, not to detailed, but so full of emotion. alice would always have been there for edward, but i'm glad you got her angry emotions in there too, it mad the comfort so much more meaningful. i like how you showed alice falling apart too. this is a really good story, it's a good thing to know that more often than not, stories that aren't always happy make the best stories of them all. this is a great example of that. great story!