That was hot.

Really, really hot.

Good job.

hehe. Cant stop giggling. Such an amusing idea - magical voyeurism. tehe.

Love it! Sexy and funny and just gorgeous. Have to feel sorry for Terry, but Parvati beating him up made me lough out loud.

I was checking my inbox and realized that somehow this story got lost in the shuffle. A very...interesting...story. Very different than your usual pairings. Good fic nonetheless.

Well that was an interesting story, and an enjoyable one. I think Padma's fear is very believable for anyone her age in that sort of situation. Never knew Terry Boot was such a pervert, but I guess you can't really blame a guy. The last line was awesome, too.

Oh. Wow. Mature themes? Yes, I'd say so - and yet handled so well. This is quite a story - and quite a way to forget the war and the fear. I do think that Terry got the surprise of his life, though he certainly didn't seem to mind. (Parvati did, but - oh well. ;-)) I guess best friends who know legilimency really DO share everything, huh?

I hope your other writer's block ends soon! I've been suffering from it for months, myself!

Ok, so I *might* have read other smutt stories too... :D This one cannot be compared to them! This was real, very well writen, ok graphic, but not...I dunno ..cheap(?). And what I liked the most was, that is was funny... a lot!

“Terry?”

“Yeah?”

“Happy Christmas, mate.”

The perfect end! ;)

Nice job!

I was so glad to see you had written something again! Even if this kind of did make me even mor3e impatient for more of your other stories. Because you're so good. I do adore Michael and Terry's friendship in here, and how they communicate through Legilimency was very clever. And I do love the way you write teenagers trying out new things...

All in all, lovely piece.

How... Interesting.

I was beginning to wonder if you'd abandoned Daphne for dead, or something. Don't you have the story done up to Chapter 30? Oh wait. We're at 29. Well, I hope the Muse bonks your noggin soon, I crave Daphne!