update

I honestly do think you should write more with her later in life and go back and edit certain chapters idk.. it's really up to you.

It's very heartbreaking but I'm glad someone finally saved her from that situation. And is this a emmett/Bella story or a Edward/Bella one.. u can't remember what it said.

Please please please please please update

Good story

please write soon.. good story though maybe have her run to volturi and fall in love with alec and make him her age with similar storys? Maybe give her the power to control the darkness and fire because of her past? thanks

update soon

I will definitely read it. so don't worry about it...Besides let me tell you something from my point of view. "EVEN IF ONLY ONE PERSON IT'S READING MY STORY... I WILL FINISH IT."

SO YOU BETTER KEEP GOING WITH THE GOOD WORD...!

really good chapter. great work. update soon

great opening

that is sad that she has to see that and want for something she always wished she could have if she went back to the cullens they could give her that.

i would read it and i love this story

if you would write a sequel i might read it but if it is a bella/edward story it would b kinda wierd since he's like 6 years older than her haha

its a possibility

Can I just ask why Bella owns mascara and eyeliner and knows how to put it on at ten years old?

Great Story!

Laura x

I say if you want to continue it and you feel like you can give time to it I would like to see where you go with it. see how bella can deal with being a 10 yr old vampire. maybe have alice as a big sister and spoils her. emm would be a great big brother.