this was perfect... thank you for putting it out there... loved it...

That was amazing. I especially loved how you protrayed Peters emotions when he was hearing Olivia's confessions to John. And the ending was equally pleasuring. Thank you!

Aw, that was AMAZING!

I loved the last paragraph. It was really, really, really good. Nice to see this from Peter's Perspective. Awesome job,

~MM

What a great writer you are! I love your diction and imagery, as well as the stream of consciousness writing! While on one hand I want to say: oh, continue this story-on the other hand, I know that this story is quite perfect where it is and where it ended.

I'm just getting started in this ficdom.

And this is the first Fringe fic going into my favorites.

You have a nice writing style.

I love the way you have written, Walter, Peter, and Olivia here.

Especially Peter. He's a complicated guy with complicated feelings for her. The reverse is true for Olivia also. No wonder they go together so well.

It did seem invasive and raw to hear her thoughts and anguish outloud in this eppy. And you captured the disturbing atmosphere so well here.

Any good? OF COURSE IT IS! I thought it was awesome, I love rants, and you wrote Peter's very well. Nice descriptive wording at the end too, when he was comforting her... real pretty.

Great fic, keep it up :)

You must not worry - your story is wonderful, a very proper psychological sketch.

Thank you!