I feel like it would be cool if they met a were-pokemon that is a shiny vulpix and works with the 'bad guys.'
Her name would be Datura. She would be overtrained, but not impossible to beat.
I also think one way the plot could continue is if they traveled with trainers, but were never caught.
The 'bad guys' would be one of the evil organization, maybe even all. They would find out that were-pokemon have stronger stats than regular, so they would want to catch them so they can dominate the world.

Hmmmm, I fell déjà vu for some reason

Well, ok...

Meh, not annoying, just somewhat boring.

Saw it coming, but, WOW, was Seth's dad FREAKED OUT! LAWLS XD

Good. Could've used another paragraph, but nontheless good.

Seth's an Eevee, I can tell. But CLIFFHANGER nontheless. Looks like Seth can't judge Adam now, eh?

Again, good story. Work on typing a little bit, though.

LAWL, broke your computer. I've had to deal with a computer with a horrible amount of hardware cards and 256MB RAM, and I finally get an upgrade of RAM (only 512MB, double, but still low), and now I read the BLACK COMMENT FROM YOU!? Yeah, YOU TRY USING AN OLD COMPUTER!

Anyways, good story so far, can't wait for the next part.

Ouch. Got caught... WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!? I'm gonna find out!

Nice. Liking it so far, since there's few grammar errors. Not bad for a first time...

I hate to break it to you, but you just broke the terms of service... you may want to take this chapter down before your account gets banned...

Aw man, you relapsed. Come on dude, new paragraphs for each time the speaker changes. Please do it? for me?

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Fix the formatting issues, it's driving me CRAZY!

Again, serious formatting issues, it was VERY confusing to read. Please fix this.

Hello then, nice to meet you and all, but now it's time to get down to business.

My only real complaint is in your formatting. Here's the deal.

1) When the person who is talking changes, you are supposed to start a new paragraph, so that was really making it hard for me keep track of who was talking.

2) This is more of a suggestion, in order to prevent confusion, you should be doing something like using italics for thoughts, this way it becomes obvious to readers that it's not said aloud, although this doesn't mean to stop indicating that they are thinking through the narration.

Other than these nitpicks, it's a pretty good start overall, and I'm looking forward to finishing the story.

T_T

Sadly, I must say that that chapter was pretty too short to really post up in my opinion.

I'll talk with Kevin. Maybe he will come up with something. Although it would be nice if he would help me with my story first. I mean, it's not my fault Lisa burnt his fur off yet, he wants to blame me.