| Reviews for The Words Written on his Chest |
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   The Imitation Wizard chapter 11 . 3/29 Beautiful story! I loved it! Bravo! |
| AlwaysSupergirl chapter 11 . 4/23/2017 I love this story, and I think it's real and raw and life, not sad or dark. Great for a first time. |
| baldcoder chapter 11 . 11/4/2016 Good story. A little sad, but good. |
| michaelfmx chapter 11 . 5/18/2015 I know it has been 6 years since you finished this story but I just wanted to let you know that people are still out there reading these stories. Thank you for this one. Love how it ended (everybody should have a Family Fun Weekend at least once a month) and the story line was great. Not every Charah story has to be all fluff. Your story line was quite unique and enjoyable. Well done. |
| bcpiano chapter 11 . 4/4/2015 I very much enjoyed this wonderful story. You are a very gifted writer. You touched my heart and made me laugh out loud. Please please keep writing. You really do have a gift. Thank You. |
| Molotov chapter 11 . 10/10/2014 Damn, this is dark and sad. And very good. |
| Crumby chapter 10 . 10/30/2012 I loved the thing with Larry coming back at the end. I also liked that Chuck didn't kill Sarnov, and thought it was realistic that Casey would do it. Great chapter. |
| Crumby chapter 9 . 10/22/2012 Loved the line, "Is it relaxing in front of a Playstation or is it killing Sarnov, because it can't be both," and how the chapter's structured with the interrupted memory at the beginning, and the whole scene at the end. Really nicely done. |
| s-david-m chapter 11 . 10/20/2012 Well written story, and compelling. Not a fate you'd wish on anyone, but it all turned out in the end. |
| Crumby chapter 8 . 10/16/2012 I love how emotional the story is without many words. |
| Crumby chapter 7 . 10/14/2012 Loved the details about Chuck's hair, and the fact that he writes down what's important to him. |
| Crumby chapter 6 . 10/7/2012 Loved the restaurant bit, the fortune cookie, the light bulb, the contrast between Chuck's proposal and his leaving. Great chapter. |
| Crumby chapter 5 . 10/7/2012 Heartbreaking. |
| Crumby chapter 4 . 7/10/2012 It was great to see Sarah. Poor Sarah. |
| somedeepmystery chapter 11 . 7/5/2012 I just recently found this story and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it. Yes, it was dark but it ended happily and without compromising what happened. Hmm, did that make any sense? Oh well. Also, I wanted to let you know that I was never confused. Maybe it helps that I got to read it altogether in one shot but I was able to easily follow along between flashbacks and present time. I saw you apologizing for that in your notes so I wanted to let you know. Thank you for sharing your story. |
