Awwwww i love Jack/9th Doctor relationship they're so funny xD This is so good!

Good job Rose, staging a polite coup. :D I really like this planet. A lot.
and the whole part about getting into the Doctor's pants...*sigh* *shakes head* Jack...Seriously, I love him. I miss him, he needs to come back to the show because he is brilliant.
Black Hole: the musical sounds like fun. And I could totally see Captain Jack being in it.
I also like the handcuffs. That is a brilliant idea.

AWWWWWW heheheh :D

That was brilliant, thank you! :P

Aza
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Great. Who doesn;t love jack and the Doctor together? They have such wonderful banter. Great story i loved it!

Just hope Rose doesn't want to go again and then changes history.

Fun! Jack always makes me laugh and I love how you portrayed him.

"So my leg will go farther around you. Okay, I admit that doesn't sound any less kinky, but it's for the greater good."

Very amusing

Good story. How did Rose get that tiara? Did she just politely ask for it like they joked about?

This is fantastic! xD So few people manage to get quite the right dynamic between Jack, Rose, and the Doctor, but you manage it beautifully. A few colloquialisms that gave me a bit of a turn - Jack's use of 'kinky' seemed out of place for one - but the story didn't truly suffer for it.

I loved your characterization of Jack. Flirtatious enough to really be Jack, but wholesome and honest enough to not seem sleazy. Buckets of good-natured honest flirtatious charm. xD I thank you for the amusing mental image of Jack trying to get the screwdriver out of the Doctor's back pocket from the front using his toes. And Rose's reaction when she walked in was so perfectly in-character! I loved it.

xD The best-worst musical ever preformed. And it involves tap dancing. Sounds like fun.

Haha! That's such a funny story. I love the conversations and the bickering.

Ah, awesome. Simply awesome. Classic Jack, classic Doctor... Weird Rose, but when is she not weird? (and, admittedly, I've never thought half as much of her as I have of Jack and the Doctor)

Foot fondling!

Fire & Napalm

I enjoyed reading this, although I felt like I was getting in on the middle of the story. I feel a little gypped, because I would love to see the whole plot written out from beginning to end. You did a great job with this scene; I feel like it's part of an episode I missed seeing :)

Ha ha! Brilliant stuff. I love Jack and I miss the Jack of old, back when he was happy and carefree. It's great to be reminded of him! Must remember to read Nine with a Northern accent though...

Haha, loved it. I can just so easily imagine this.

aw! poor jack! he fancies the doctor, but the doctor loves rose! poor guy. still, hilarious story!