Element of surprise...I love it

Stupid Edward

I agree,he is annoying.I don't know how Bella lives with him

it was totally smart God i love twilight and i love MR so it was a complete thrill to read something so entertaining. And it was knida funny the spin u can provied in maximum ride is totally cool if u rite more stories like this i would always read them i enjoyed your so much. u may have a future in being a writier.

i could be ur number one 1 fan. im smiling!

Keep the good work rolling.

Lili fiorino

nice job!

NICE

tho it would help if u sortta intoduced da OCs

OKAY.. Ideas,,ya got me there. Uhm, how about...i dont know. gr i'll let you know if i think of something. Post a note that says u need ideas. I did that and ppl give you ideas.

I have a very serious guestion. I know you said this was a one-shot. (At least i think it said that.) Well, could you make a different story but have it start this way and make it more than a one-shot. If you dont understand lemme know.

It needs more.

He he he I liked it lots. Hmm... Edward seemed like a jerk though. Made me scratch chin and say "Hmm... I never knew Eddy was such a jerk." Really nice story though.

Awwh I love it! I like how it's kind of a Twilight crossover too! Though, I would've pictured Emmett doing the teasing, but then again it's nice to have Edward being a little OOC. I always did wonder how he would be if he was a little more like Emmett.

ha! im still smiling! hehe

Laughing.

Why did you put preston in the disclaimer? He's not even in this story!~

I find it funny how you put us it. _~

I didn't know you could write this well.

That was great!

aw! that was soo sweet!

lol thats good and funny edward keeps walking in was so funny.

fly on

midnight