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   lenokkk chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 Oh, you make me cry. I love all in this story, though it's very tragic. I'd like to ask you some questions, if you agree. How did Alice return to the Cullens after Jasper's death? In other words, she came with the Volturi or they didn't meet Cullen and Alice came back alone? Thank you! |
| Xx.WildatHeart.xX chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 OMJ! I'M GONNA CRY! I LOVE JASPER! The way you did it, it felt like I lost him! OMJ! SO, SO, WELL WRITTEN! Thank you! |
| lol chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 OH GOOOOOOOD JAAAAAAAASPER! ...okay, that was too dramatic... This second person thing is very interesing! Maybe you could write a 2. chapter. |
| MCR Killjoys chapter 1 . 11/13/2012 i loved it xx |
| CriminalxMindsxFantic chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 SEQUEL! I have to agree with you - they completely forgot about Jasper. I love this version! |
| JaliceFan66 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 *Breaks down crying* Your an amazing writer, but this is just heartbreaking! |
| Angel Slyth chapter 1 . 2/13/2011 Oh, poor Alice. It seems a bit heartless of the family to focus on her but from what Ive seen hes always in the báckground except when they need him to either manipulate them or lead them in a fight. Very well written and emotional. |
| Jaspergirl1123 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010 awaw tht was really sad. i cried. hahahhahahaha i love jasper so tht realy hit home. it was good tho. |
| Vamp chapter 1 . 2/7/2010 So, extremely late and likely that this story has been forgotten, but wow! That was so brilliant, so well-written, so...painful. I love some angst, but that made me ache. And yeah, it annoyed me too that nobody cared about Jasper in Breaking Dawn. This is a great story |
| suredaze96 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Wow. I am speechless. This is AMAZING, and so sad!It's really well written, particularly the suspense when you're wondering what she's trying not to think about what happened. And what an ending! It was pitch-perfect. Fab story! X |
| bellacullensince1989 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009 No offense but that is seriously depressing! Cool, and well written but depressing. |
| sleepsheep chapter 1 . 4/13/2009 I know this is a late review, but this was so amazing! I was really drawn into it like it was real. I cried! And it was new and interesting to read it in Second Person. I was also irritated in Breaking Dawn that noone seemed to care that Jasper was back too. Anyway, this must be the best tragedy I have ever read! |
| DancingWithDaffodils chapter 1 . 4/1/2009 ohh god i'm crying. this is so sad, really powerful and i love it so much. i think you've captured Alice brilliantly, and it works really well in second person. i love it |
| Alisa chapter 1 . 3/29/2009 So Sad!**sobs** I Love Jasper too much **sobs** he was my life and you made him die! **sobs** I will find you! |
