Stupid that she wouldn’t talk to him for three weeks. Her reason is lame. No real plot or character development in this story

See getting pregnant fixes everything. What a horrible message to send!

And Bella is a grown ass woman why the fuck wasn't she on the pill AND made Edward wear a condom?

This Gem was in chapter 13

"Charlie was there everytime I was giving me the cold shoulder"

Edward makes ANOTHER comment that implies hes a nasty skank and AGAIN bella doesn't ask him to elaborate. FUCK

Im surprised bella didn't have more to say or ask about what Edward said "I was different in new york, not really a one woman man". What does that mean? That he had multiple women at the same time? He just fucked and ducked? The way he choked when he thought bella was asking him how many women hes dated lets me know hes a nasty skank.

Why would bella care how many women he dated? THE ONLY question is how many he fucked. Im disappointed in bella.

Funny how he "wanted this for so long" yet never really made an effort to find her. What a piece of shit. He doesn't love her, if he did he would have came to her when he was on break from school that first year. But he didn't did he? no that year or the fifteen that followed.

Bella is a fucking moron to jump him like an easy fucking whore

Edward didn't even talk to masen? He just fucking grabbed alexa and left? What a cunt

And why is everyone acting like what tanya did was unforgivable? She did what was right for her. Better to leave then to fuck the kid up.

I don't see masen acting all excited about having a sister, id think he'd be jealous and pissed. He never had a father and just when he meets his he finds out that his dad has a baby that lives with him. So she will get all the things he never did. And like it or not Edward will never feel the same way for masen as he does and will feel about alexa. Bella should have just got with someone else.

Bella wanted more kids but she didn't want to "without someone by her side hat time around" WTF? "side hat"?

This is the problem you run into when people never learned the proper way to edit their writing...they just use spell check.

In chapter 2 you said that Edwards baby mama and him had been dating for a couple years...now in chapter 5 you say she was a one night stand.

So which is it? And really? Your story isn't very long and you cant even keep it straight? How embarrassing!

So they were together in highschool….bella got pregnant...didn't tell him...Edward went away to college I presume and never looked back? HUH, guess he didn't really like bella all that much huh? Fucker

she's a moron who doesn't speak up.

Good plot, and nice job adding details!

Hey, I don't know if you still this account but your story is amazing and I thought you should post it on Wattpad cos it's a great story and a lot of people will like it, if you don't want to then can I please have the permission to post it? It's not so I can own it and pretend it's my story but so people can read your works.

ewww hes slept with so many women he wont even tell her how many...mr not a one woman man...fucking gross
go watch your insides out with bleach bella...ths is soooo not the guy or you! and he has someone elses kid...f that