Oh my. I really loved this. Poor, poor Rick. You could tell he was seriously hurting during that part of the movie. You portrayed that very nicely here.

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful *sob*

This is so... Waouh ! For me it is EXACTLY what Rick had think. And it is so sad...
Thannk you very much !

Great work, very well written. I admit I got a lump in my throat... good job!

Nice, very nice. I think you caught what he could have been thinking at that moment very well. I remember the first time I watched the movie and saw Evelyn die...talk about a state of shock. Thank heaven Alex brought her back!

Beautiful story. Written so wonderfully I was tearing up ! Great job

Beautiful story. Written so wonderfully I was tearing up ! Great job

that was damn good

Wow, rip my heart out why don't you? That was a very compelling mix of humor (in the flashbacks) and so very sad. I'm so glad it all worked out. Very fitting for the scene, excellent job.

First fanfic that's ever made me cry.

It's always nice to see that someone can dig deep into Rick without completely immasculating him... like they did in that travesty of a third movie. See... this is why people like us should have written the Dragon Emperor script.

Job well done.

outstanding, the first and only one shot i will ever read for this scene.

WOW! AMAZING! It was sad, heartfelt and you have done a fantastic job in making the reader feel what the character is feeling. For your first work i'm gobsmacked. Not many people are this great off the start line!

Well this was just lovely! I really liked the flashbacks to the special moments he remembered with her, so sweet and heartbreaking.

The grammar and spelling are perfect which is a relief, I hate reading a fic with so many mistakes, but in your's I saw none!

It was a short chapter but filled with so much, thank you for sharing it. I want to get out my Mummy collection now and watch them! lol

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Fantastic and emotional fic, great job!

aww that was sad!