This is a nice piece. Some well thought-out insights into Warren's reactions and attitude, as well as backstory that makes it fit. And Will trailing along after Warren just works with his personality, that he'd want to make certain he didn't hurt the guy permanently.

Nice. A very interesting "what if" take on the game. Lacking air is already something to freak out over, but to have this kind of phobia was an interesting thing to explore here :)

Nice piece, I enjoyed it. Good characterisation of Warren's attitude.

I really liked this! Any insight into Warren is a good thing and I like stories that are just about everyday school stuff. Hope there is more of this to come!