Reviews for Unmasked |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! |
![]() ![]() Aww I abesolutley love this fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for mentioning the ages in the beginning i can't even begin to tell you how confused i was. i was like trying to piece together their ages, by the things they do. i was like of they can drink, then iggy, and fang are probably like 21, max is the younger sister, so 18, zephyr, is "a kid" so like 16, angel is younger so 15, and if i ever see nudge, i don't know like 18 also. then i was just like "i probably only got iggy and fangs ages right." oh well looks like i was right about one thing. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol as soon as I read the part where we could name him whatever, I just named him in my mind as Max. Then I bursted out laughing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() same. it's short sweet and to the point. i love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Quite graphic though... I thought the last line was hilarious though! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write the most amazing stories. You're probably my favourite author on this site. Your Maximum Ride stories completely capture their personalities perfectly. I don't know how you do it, it's amazing. I always remember one of your stories in particular, Relocation. That was the first story of yours that I read. Whenever I look for Maximum Ride fanfiction, I always think of that story. It's perfect. And now I've read this one too and it was just as perfect. I hope you continue to write fanfiction because you're one of the best contributors to it, in my opinion. There's rarely a story I find that compares to the stuff you write. So, yeah. Thanks and stuff. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its fredrick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from the whole sexual theme here (so glad there weren't any DETAILS), it was a cute story. Always a sucker for an emotional Fang 3 Keep writing! -Fnickforever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it - . |
![]() ![]() so his name can be anything... hmmm... how bout Steve, or, Bob, or William, or, Crud, or, I know, I know! Monica! Just kidding, the story was awesome Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() It should be Nicholas or David. Something classic and boring |
![]() ![]() What is Fangs real name! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have to say this.. I absolutely love your writing.. I've read this story dozens of times, over and over and over.. And I'm just in love with it. I have read all of your stories, please, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() it so much |