Reviews for One Hundred and forty nearly Twelve
MotekElm chapter 13 . 13h
in the books, the sword can destroy the horcruxes because it already slay the Basilisk, so it is infused with Basilisk venom but not yet in this timeline
MotekElm chapter 3 . 15h
wow, things are moving quite quickly!
MotekElm chapter 1 . 15h
yay, great start. the premise puts them in the same place as Reptilia28's challenge, without the talking to death part.
blueycat chapter 4 . 7/20
I nearly cried when I read the part where Hermione says that she would always love Harry before going. Ron never deserved her at all. And to know that she died due to his abuse. It broke my heart. Hope Harry and hermione be happy till the end.
blueycat chapter 25 . 7/19
And why would he use the elder wand? It still considers Dumbledore as it's master. And why would Voldemort call his followers when he is still 'babymort'?
blueycat chapter 23 . 7/19
Harry has not met Remus yet in this story but it's weird that Sirius mentions him without any proper instructions and aren't the entire Weasley family staying at Harry's?
ReaderOfDramione chapter 29 . 6/29
This was really cute although the ending was rushed. It was really cool and really good overall
love4HP chapter 24 . 6/28
For all the security, inviting reporters to their home disclosing the location was surely a great way to keep everyone safe! How immature! N what is it with Hermione always shouting at Harry in his head if he goes away for sometime! I was about to write that some of the reviews here are harsh. But reading this amateurish part surely makes me feel the same.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 29 . 6/17
Loved it!
WindbornesWord chapter 29 . 3/24
Great Fic if a little rushed. They grew too powerful too quickly, still this was a fun read and I’m sad that Broomstick is no longer around to gift us with wonderful Harmony stories.
Ninamaria429 chapter 29 . 3/20
This was by far one of the best time travel stories I've read. I loved it!
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 29 . 3/9
I really liked the story.
It seems to me that Harry is always going to be a humble boy.
The final comment was to my liking.
Kira
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6
I think I lost brain cells enough in the first half of the chapter from the fact Harry moves faster than crack-fuelled day trip by the Flash to Vegas. The first section was decent but then Harry went from Harry to a full blown ripped off rom-com protagonist in less time than it takes me to sneeze.
Flygar chapter 7 . 3/6
Nothing on Siruis' medical needs? Hell, now bath/shower after 10 years means he probably needs to have dead skin and dirt literally scraped off of him at least, not to mention disease, muscle degradation, and everything else.
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 20 . 3/5
The way they caught Lockhart seemed good to me.
Snape's thing was extremely funny.
Harry is tremendously romantic.
Kira
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