THis was really, really good.

I can't believe I forgot to review this!

Everything about the writing was beautiful, but the last sections was really perfection. You have amazing talent.

really good . also kinda sad and very touching, great job!

Wow, this story's so honest and so insightful. Amazing. Loved it.

Amazing.

That's all I can say because while reading it, I could feel a load of raw emotions. And I think to pull that off is an amazing feat. Great job.

-speechless-

Wow.

Oh wow. This is absolutely brilliant. So beautiful. I love how you got into Parvati's head, and little by little, dissect her feelings. Ii never would've thought she'd be in love with Dean - or Sseamus, for that matter, and now I think you've converted me. :D

This was absolutely amazing. I love it. :D

-toffeecakesxox.

That was incredibly beautiful and painful and real. This is such a wonderful interpretation of Parvati and her relationships, particularly with Padma, her father and Lavendar.

Oh my Jay. This was wonderful. I love how you took this from birth until death. And the parallels between Padma and Lavender and Parvati and Lavender were quite well done. And the Dean section just about tore my heart out. I'm glad she found happiness with Seamus. Thank you for the pleasant read. :)

-honda

Amazing - just amazing. I know I have a cold at the moment, but the fact my eyes are welling up with tears has nothing to do with that.

And I just want to take this time and say how glad I am that you're posting online again - you're one of my favorite authors, and you have such talent. I really hope that your original writing goes well enough that you get published, so that more people can read your work - but do come back to old HPFC, and post some of your amazing fics, okay?

And...wow, again, this was amazing. You've given Parvati such depth here - I love her relationship with her 'sisters', and the way she grows, and at the same time stays the same. Fantastic, wonderful, amazing job - oh, I can't say it enough, can I?

Keep Writing!

Wow, this is absolutely gorgeous Jay. I really love the way you've fleshed Parvati out, but I think my favourite section is the ending, because it says so much, and it reminds me of one of my favourite books.

Awesome work, and I'm definitely favouriting this.

This was so beautiful! I adored it! Fantastic job! The fact that Parvati became closer to Lavender was great, and then Padma's death was absolutely perfect. And her loving Dean first, and then Seamus, was so real and perfect and beautiful! But 'Life' was my favorite. Beautiful job! This was absolutely amazing!

That was just wonderful! I'll never think of Parvati the same way. Padma's fate was never mentioned in the books, was it? but I just loved it all. excellent interpration of the prompts given.

Wow. You're right, you should be proud of this, because it's amazing. I mean, amazing. Have a hug; welcome back. *huggles*

Oh, and favouriting by the way, because...well yeah ;)

Wow. This was really..wow. I've never really thought about Parvati much, but this was really good.