Reviews for Time to Move on |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I found this story to be very easy to read, and highly enjoyable. I liked the little jokes between Liss and Christian that showed how much they love each other. Christian is a very difficult character to capture, but I found that you did a fairly good job with him, particularly in that fatasl question ("If I turned Strigoi… would you kill me?") I also liked how you explained the bit with the Strigoi caring for something from their former lives. Well done :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was awesome! your writing style is really good and you stuck to the characters amazingly. i was on stumbleupon and had vampire academy as my subject and it took me to this! im so glad it did! great job :D |
![]() ![]() i like it i think u should make more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...Adorable..So cute...So realistic..I totally loved that... |
![]() ![]() omg this is really good you should write more xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good and I loved Christian here - though i hate Lissa - _ awesome one-shot : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was sweet |
![]() ![]() this was a really good chapter thingy! christian is absoloutley awesome! but so was dimitri before the whole stigoi thing. i wish there was a combo of the two... sorry, im off subject now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really liked this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations to the max! Supreme characterisation, I am most extremely impressed. That came across just right, that did. I can imagine it being EXACTLY what each of them were thining. A very touching and sweet moment. I applaud your excellent Litterary skills! |
![]() ![]() I love this..really it is very good... so like the real books.. Thank you :) i really hope they will be together again |
![]() ![]() Hey I just wanted to say that this is awesome! In fact im convinced you are richelle mead in disguise. Please continue writing about VA cause you have totally got it down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. |
![]() ![]() Aww! I've never had a one-shot make me cry before. That's heart tearing. Great writing. |